BREAKING DAWN WRITE-A-THON

[kaiwynn]

MEND THE FAILBOAT.

After reading Breaking Dawn, what do you wish had happened? What do you think should have happened? Hey, what could have happened, if not for various SMeyer-related reasons?

Here's your chance to rewrite the book how you want to, if only in a few little pieces.

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we're all newborns in this strange new world (edward) pg13

[bebitched]

Bella’s blood covers your hands, sticky crimson webbing your fingers, and while you’d always had a subtle appreciation for metaphors, the perfection of this one is utterly lost on you. Her heart is still and each second scratches another tick mark on your skin, but there’s no wincing for you. You are utterly still. Waiting

Re: we're all newborns in this strange new world (edward) pg13

[kaiwynn]

oh god. you have slayed me.

Re: we're all newborns in this strange new world (edward) pg13

[bebitched]

Whoops, sorry about that ;) But I'm glad you enjoyed it! That was kinda the effect I was going for.

Re: we're all newborns in this strange new world (edward) pg13

[yoursolace]

holy crap. this is PERFECT.

Re: we're all newborns in this strange new world (edward) pg13

[bebitched]

Thank you so much!