Down, When I Should Be Up

[kajel]

I know where I should be. My mind is three moves ahead, but somehow, I've lost a step in the process. My mind is there, however, not the rest of me. I see where I should be. How do I get there

Comments

[bleodswean]

Intriguing! I like how open-ended this is and how rational the narrator sounds!

[kajel]

Thanks!

[sinnamongirl]

Interesting! A lot left unsaid; good job of telling the story without a lot of words!

[kajel]

Thank you.

[my_name_is_jenn]

I see where I should be. How do I get there?

This pretty much sums up my life right now, haha.

Love this.

[kajel]

Thank you. It pretty much summed up my whole last year, now that I think about it.

[dee_aar2]

Powerful. Short and Crisp ... yet so much has been conveyed.

Well Done

[kajel]

Thank you!

[murielle]

Fascinating! I like your take on the prompt. Well done!

[kajel]

Thanks!