Comments | kajornwan: [Fic] Heavenly Win Part II (end)

kajornwan

[Fic] Heavenly Win Part II (end)

May 31, 2009 09:05

Because everyone was so nice to spoil me with such a great birthday, a little pay back for those who have been waiting and wondering if I will ever finish this dirty fic. It's very short by my standard, but I'm not good with writing smex these days >.< Sorry ( Read more... )

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angel0399 May 31 2009, 15:22:23 UTC

“I’m fully automatic, didn’t you know? Unlike you, I can do this all night,” Mikhail grinned devilishly and began to shorten the leash in his hand.

Ha!! Oh, I love it!!! I want a fully auto Mik too!!!

kajornwan June 1 2009, 02:53:30 UTC

Who wouldn't want a fully auto Mik with endless bullets and probably potent ones too XDD

keleosnoonna May 31 2009, 15:44:51 UTC

Holy shit woman. The heavenly vision of a leather-clad FeiLong will hunt my dreams for YEARS to come. *dies*

AWESOME ♥

sdhfksdhfjdsf and I do love your MikxFei interaction cuz I know from my comments it may seem I'm only here for TEH SMEX, but I swear that's not it XDDDD

kajornwan June 1 2009, 02:55:04 UTC

You'll have to blame it on the manip. It has been haunting me until now *nosebleeds*

Thank you for continuing to read and I'm very glad you like it. *hugs*

iamjusttoocool June 2 2009, 18:15:30 UTC

wow this is soo good, haha, great jo

kajornwan June 3 2009, 04:46:42 UTC

Thank you, glad you like it ^_^

nekomurasaki June 2 2009, 18:22:51 UTC

This is YUMMY! Fei and Misha are a potent combination - can't wait to read your next update. More please!!!!

kajornwan June 3 2009, 04:47:38 UTC

They are indeed potent. They kill me every time XD Will try to update soon. *hugs*

hsyang June 2 2009, 19:41:27 UTC

How generous of you to give a gift on your own birthday, and to include such a thoughtful mention of me in your dedication! *kisses*

Now on to the fun --

There, the maddeningly beautiful leader of Baishe stood in all his glory in front of his prey, all done up in black leather from head to toe.
GUH!!! *vegetarian with leather fetish has heart attack on the spot*

“That did NOT come with the costume,” Mikhail protested as he stared blankly at the black leather whip, trying to imagine how Fei Long was planning to put it to use.
Fei is so resourceful. Does this mean that Misha is ass-whipped? *giggles uncontrollably*

That beast of yours has to be tamed,” Fei Long responded, cracking his whip before the sentence ended without warning at the man’s crotch and sent the Russian grabbing the edge of his chair to keep himself from jumping.
*laughs with wicked glee*

“Or else it’s your turn to be my bitch for a day. Deal?”
*gets bad thoughts about Misha being Fei's bitch, 'cause Fei can be so demanding sometimes*

Never fuck with Liu Fei ( ... )

kajornwan June 3 2009, 04:46:04 UTC

LOL OMG you're right. It is a lap dance XD (didn't think about it that way). I can't deal with Fei in black leather either *passes out from seeing an image too intense*. Too bad I don't think YA will ever give us that although if she does it may be immediately banned for literally harmful content XD)

P.S. I love your naughty Mik x Fei so much and that gave me an idea of how to finish this fic so you totally deserve to be mentioned ^___^