[fiC] Cruel Intentions - Revelation Chapter 10

[kajornwan]

I disappeared for like two months >.< Sorry T_T But at long last I'm done with chapter 10 (and 5 pages into 11 *yay*). If baby doesn't get sick again it should be ready soon (if anyone's still reading, that is XD

Comments

[nikkita_maldita]

I think I've a new favorite subordinate: Yuan!I love his loyalty to Fei!

Tsk tsk tsk, Mikhail is frightening when he's angry. With all the love and adoration he has for Fei, one would think it's impossible for him to lift a hand against Fei. It's scary what too much love can make a man do.

And of course, there's only one way to describe a furious Fei: stunning.

“I’ll fucking shoot you, Asami, and every last one of you lying, deceitful bastards!” Fei Long yelled, his whole body shaking from the anger and pain in his heart. There was no one in the world he could trust. No one.
*hugs Fei* Poor, poor Feilong. Dont be like that, lots of people love you, most of all, Mik. He would do everything just to keep you safe and happy even if it means destroying and killing himself and everyone that causes you pain in the process

[kajornwan]

Awwwww how much I miss my long comments *hugs you* Write away. I feel flattered over long comments (even when it's about killing me LOL

[kajornwan]

I'm glad you like Fei worrying about Tao. I kept wondering why Fei wasn't worried in the manga (probably not enough pages) and I just had to put that in

[kajornwan]

I know she really could mess him up T_T I'm actually half afraid half wishing that she'll do Mik x Fei. I'm pretty happy with this image of Mik she'd been giving. Oh well, I don't think we're gonna get any anyway be it Mik or Yoh. *sobs*

[saiyuki_win]

Thank you for the update! It really made my day! =DD

Really missed your writing. Really love how you make everything fall into place. So intense. Finally, we get to see Mik and Fei together again.

Looking forward to the next chapter! <3

[kajornwan]

Thank you so much for such a kind comment. I missed posting too T_T *hugs all* And I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've been out of my writing mode for so long I wasn't confident about it at all. Next chapter coming up fast, promise (although it's not much ^^!)

[angel0399]

So freaking hot!!! *fans herself* I guess that's what happens when you have so much sexual tension you could cut it with a knife lol!

And you actually had them being violent to each other, way to mix it up! But I am happy they didn't seriously hurt each other. Great job on this! So if you don't update often we can look forward to long chapters? ^_^

[kajornwan]

Really? *_* I was worried about the smex. Haven't written it for soooooo long it feels so weird! But I love brutal sex (not S&M though) *nosebleed*. Love them together so much. Next chapter coming right up ^_^

Thanks sweetie. *chu chu*

[angel0399]

Yes the brutal sex was awesome!! And needed; they needed to just tear into each other.

*imagining raw hot sex........nosebleed*

Anyways, something I've always loved about Mikhail was his intensity and passion. To me, it's what makes him the perfect person for Fei.

So looking forward to the next chapter! ^_^

[radcat38]

Wow...good chapter. Love this alternative look at VF. You really make it believable and you really make it work. Thanks for updating. Hope all stays well in your home. cat

[kajornwan]

Thank you. Glad you find it believable. It was very hard staying with the main plot but I also needed to fill in a lot of things I find missing from it. Thanks again for continuing to read and comment. It truly keeps me going ^___^ *hugs*

Faye