[fic] cruel intentions - revelation chapter 11

[kajornwan]

A surprisingly quick update (by my standard these days). But Muse wanted to work, and I obeyed XD Somehow I feel she's already left for a long vacation T_T

Comments

[angel0399]

*screams* Ok how do I have back to back nights made by 2 wonderful fangirls!! *hugs you and Alexis (again)*

I loved the romance in this, even when it wasn't blatantly there. And come on, we all knew Mik was going to that exchange, regardless of what Fei said.

I’m his bitch, not yours You better tell him!! But I am happy to see Alexei behaving himself (as best he can lol!)

I don't smoke but even I find those cigs sexy!! This was such a great chapter, now I can head to bed smiling! Can't wait til the next one *hugs*

[kajornwan]

Thank you do much for your comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had a great time imagining them together too.....if only it was true. *sighs*

I thought those Treasurer were sexy as hell. I don't smoke either LOL

[baby_fei]

Thank you *_* I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm trying to update as soon as my Muse permits. It's becoming really hard to follow the manga without repeating everything T_T

The real exchange was just as Mik said, "That's it? How boring." =_= How sad that nothing gets solved except another A x A smex.

WOW to Whiskey and Cigar lounge. This means you can rec me some fine cigars for hubby? I have a weakness for men who smoke cigars *_*

playing hostess to the rich and famous
anyone I know or worth mentioning? XD

[char_comet]

A very beautiful and well written chapter (and I am not telling this because of the romance XDDD)
I especially enjoyed the teasing part between Fei Long and Alexei. I think that in that feeling of "home" for Fei also this new relationship with Mikhail's brother helps ^_^
The idea of Fei long giving Yoh the key to free himself is very interesting.... I don't know if this would be possible in the canon, but seen by this point of view, the way how Fei explained it certainly has a sense! ^_-

P.S. I hope that the long vacation of your muse will turn short ^_^

[kajornwan]

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. I thought you'd like something thrown in Alexei's face too. XD But I had a good time giving Fei a brat baby brother that was Alexei. I think he'll have fun toying with a brother like that *hu hu* (while Mik slaps him around a bit for constantly trying to steal his candy).

I'll try to update as soon as I figure out how to deal with the exchange. *is stressed already by thinking about it*

[char_comet]

No, it's not that I would like Fei take a "bad" revenge on Alexei. I like Alexei too, but he deserves a "sweet" revenge for being so cruel and hurting so much both Fei and Mikhail that time when he picked up the phone - just on that purpose - when Mikhail called Fei that night. I only wanted Fei to show Alexei that it wasn't him the god of sex in their relationship and that Alexei can be won ("defeatet") too. But his "defeat" shouldn't be the realization that in the end he wasn't able to conquer Fei (I don't think this was for him of that importance because he had not fell for Fei) but he should realize that it isn't him who can win the battle of sex-god between them (No, I don't mean that it has to be Fei, but at least at the same level)

[kajornwan]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it and that you think I've given him some dignity. I have a certain image of Yoh in mind that I enjoyed writing from the very beginning,...if only he wasn't messed up so bad in the manga *cries*. And you're right, that was the most flattering comment indeed! *hugs*

[kajornwan]

I agree with you totally, perfection beyond words = It's soo Fei!! XD

[c11]

Another great chapter in your story! I like the romantic side and the few remarks that inlight this part because I feel sad for Fei Long who has his job to do with his heart torn apart. His action toward Yoh is unexpected but it is maybe the cruellest way for Fei to punish him and it explain more realistically the traitor's appearance on the ship.

[kajornwan]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I wish I could let them stay together longer, but oh, well, perhaps after the exchange they would. And in my mind I thought his action towards Yoh was reasonable though it's too bad we didn't see anything like that in the manga. My lack of support for Yoh/Fei aside, I had hoped to see Fei being more upset about it or even more sad than that over Yoh. After all, the man had been there with him for so long and Fei just discarded him altogether. That was something she could have spared some of those 11 pages of A X A smex over. Oh, well, the world needs 11 pages of A x A smex, what can I say *sighs*

*hugs* and thank you again for stopping by.

[c11]

Yes, she could have spared some pages of AxA smex and give us good explanation for Fei, Mikhael and Yoh. I like the way you discribed Fei / Yoh relationship because they have feelings (seven years are long time, like Asami said) and need to deal with it. But IMHO, the end of Naked Truth seemed written in a rush (like sensei was in no mood to continue and really needed a break, she gave us an end, even if it disappointed some fans).
You do as you wish but don't they deserve an happy ending? (the worst is that I am not a big fan of that).

[kajornwan]

I know *sighs* I wish she'd just drop it for 2 years and continue when she feels like it like Cantarella though. While I sympathize with her and understand her feelings, I simply can't congratulate an author who destroys her story to please fans like she has no pride in it or love for it, you know what I mean? (and she did it to please fans including going as far as changing things she had planned to happen, which was nice of her but I can't respect her as a great mangaka like I used to anymore).

As for me, I'm writing two endings and you all will get to choose only one to read XD So feel free to choose the tragic one if you're not a big fan of happy ending ^__^