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kajornwan

[fic] cruel intentions - revelation chapter 12

Jan 23, 2010 23:19

OMG I have been gone for two months!!! *gomen* But this chapter has been done for a while before I left for Italy, and when my dear beta abandoned me because she's so busy right now *hugs her* I kind of feel a bit unconfident about posting on my own T_T But anyway, here it is and I have to get back to work *cries some more ( Read more... )

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lovetheusagi January 23 2010, 17:42:08 UTC

yay, an update(I hada feeling something nice was waiting for me today :)i like the way the story is progressing and this chapter is really good!!! thanks :D

kajornwan January 24 2010, 02:33:34 UTC

Thank you ^___^ I'm glad to still have readers even when I've been gone so long and glad that you like it!

char_comet January 23 2010, 18:56:10 UTC

Sorry if, before telling you any other things, I have a pressing question to ask you that came to my mind the same instant I finished to read the chapter: do you really think that Fei Long went to the exchange with the purpose of getting them all - the deed, the boy, and Asami? or you simply made "your" Mikhail think so because, even if he trusts Fei Long, he is so jealous and afraid of having Fei harmed when that man is involved ( ... )

kajornwan January 24 2010, 02:32:32 UTC

To answer your first question, no I don't think Fei was planning to get them all in the manga. I'm twisting the facts to my liking here. As you know I'm terribly disappointed about how Fei abandoned all his strength and will in NT to become somewhat of a saint, melting over Akihito's words and appearing so powerless. So if I have a chance of rewriting that here in my own world, I will. I love my evil, passionate Fei and I want to give him the control back and show that Fei too can or at least plan to pull some strings. And I think my Mikhail knows Fei too well that he realizes this in an instant because he loves this passionate and stubborn Fei who's always driven by his heart and his love. But that's just my preference on how I'd like to see NT be done differently. ^__ ( ... )

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kajornwan January 24 2010, 02:37:45 UTC

Thank you for the kind comment. I'm glad you like it and even offered to beta. but lol at mental criteria. I think I do have a mental criteria - someone who already lacks some sanity! So PM me you email then if you really don't mind suffering yourself over this. ^^! But it's not like I write fast these days so no hurry. Thank you sweetie!

nekomurasaki January 23 2010, 23:31:32 UTC

Awesome chapter! Thanks for stopping my Mik withdrawals at last!!! >_<

kajornwan January 24 2010, 02:38:20 UTC

Thank you! Ohhhh but no one is curing my Mik's withdrawal!!! T____T

sephbuttons January 24 2010, 02:41:45 UTC

YAY! You are back!! :) honestly, I don't mind waiting for your chapters (I understand you have a life hehehe) as long as I know you will not abandon us :D
I love this story. I get all giddy when I read it, I love Fei so much and you do such a wonderful job writing him.

I must say, other than couple of small grammatical errors, this chapter is great!! At least that's what I think :)

Thanks for continuing this story.

kajornwan January 25 2010, 09:57:14 UTC

Thank you for still reading this even though I'm unforgivably late. I promise myself I will finish this fic properly and I shall even if I turn 80 *gets shot* lol Just kidding. But really, thank you for your comment. It does keep me going when I know someone's still reading it otherwise I'll probably finish the fic and read it myself XD