[fic] Paradise Day 4

Jun 16, 2010 23:23

So sorry for the looong delay. It amazes me how between opening a new branch and starting one more company on top of raising kids and dogs, I still have time to write anything. But it turns out I simply need a little Mik x Fei too! Well, here it is ( Read more... )

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portisheart June 17 2010, 15:30:02 UTC
both of them carry their bundle of past remembrances - hopefully they'll help each other get over it sometime..
hmmm sweaty oily Mik in his garage - our dragon seems to have coarsen his taste for beautiful things XDD.
ah, now a bit of sand sneaked into Mik's perfect planning mill, and action ensues. the very true russian mafioso "fire the bastard & kill his folks" surfaces.. i ab-so-lu-te-ly love Fei Long's solution! *ROFLMFAO*. plz plz more details on Mik's big show night in your next chappie XDD

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kajornwan June 18 2010, 03:04:46 UTC
Thank you. I love the idea that they seem so wrong for each other but then again they have lot of things in common. Everyone says Mik seems like the opposite of Fei. If you look at it again from another point of view, Mik and Fei are actually the same person. Especially what Fei did to Akihito was pretty much the same as what Mik did. They couldn't care less about other people in general or moral issues and just do what they want. They're two fabulous villains and I love to keep them that way.

hmmm sweaty oily Mik in his garage - our dragon seems to have coarsen his taste for beautiful things XDD.
hmmm I don't know, Fei gets turned on by torturing Aki at several points, no? I think the greatest thing about Fei is the contrast in him. He looks so elegant and refined but he kills, rapes, tortures and possibly steals, lies, and cheat as well.

And XD I'm not sure if stripping Mik will actually happen though. Let me think about it *winks*

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angel0399 June 18 2010, 06:26:23 UTC
hmmm I don't know, Fei gets turned on by torturing Aki at several points, no?

To me, not really. I think he did those things more so to get a rise out of Asami. I mean, yes, he did also think Aki was a pretty boy he could play with, but it was all business with him.

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kajornwan June 18 2010, 10:55:02 UTC
True, but even then, the things he did to Aki doesn't really reflect his refined and elegant image. I think he's the most elegant character I've ever seen in image, but he's villain material and isn't afraid of doing anything unconventional (I think). It's just that I love Fei as a villain with a heart. I'm often disturbed by him being a goody goody guy with too much morals and conventional tastes (everybody loves Aki and WTF? Fei gets thrown into that typical pool?) like in NT *shudders*.

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thegreymoon June 17 2010, 18:42:49 UTC
Mik/Fei! Yay! XDDD

I love how you've managed to fit so many moods into this: from the angst and the seriousness in the beginning, to romantic and serene, then cranky, funny and mischievous in the end! (I really cracked up laughing at the end, LOL)!

On another note, I want to go to paradise too! *cries* LOL at the boat sinking after Mik made such a show checking it out (and that is why I am never going sailing if I can help it T__T) and I loved how possesive he is about his engines! Also, I loved that dog, hehehe!

And did I mention how much I loved the end? :P I think that it needs mentioning again! LOL, poor Mik! Fei is so funny! ^__^

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kajornwan June 18 2010, 03:43:25 UTC
O_O! I didn't know you'd be reading! It's so intimidating! >_But I'm glad you enjoyed my little nonsense of a story. Every once in a while I just want to act on some silly imagination XD ( ... )

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thegreymoon June 18 2010, 07:24:49 UTC
LOL, I'll never cease to be amused by the fact that you think that I am intimidating! XDDD ( ... )

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kajornwan June 18 2010, 10:43:49 UTC
I'll never cease to be amused by the fact that you think that I am intimidatingBut you are T_T *hides from your icon ( ... )

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linen_straps June 18 2010, 21:10:45 UTC
Nice! =) And funny, too. XD I like the idea of Mik repairing his car and stuff. Thank you for finding the time to write it! :)

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juninunmul June 24 2010, 08:08:40 UTC

jamie310 July 12 2010, 23:13:39 UTC
Awesome!!!

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