[fic] March Second + fanart

Nov 19, 2010 08:31

Finally I have something to post, even though it's just a fantasy turned crappy one shot LOL But Revelation is being beta-ed and I'm already writing the next one so hopefully updates should be faster.

Title: March Second (A continuation of February FirstRating: NC-17 ( Read more... )

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malyntine November 19 2010, 17:26:47 UTC
Amazing, sequel please! ;)

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kajornwan November 20 2010, 00:05:29 UTC
LOL I think a lot of people who read it hated this one shot so I might get killed for a sequel XD But that hasn't stopped me from spamming with Mik x Fei in the past, so if my muse permits, perhaps I can one day. ^___^

Thank you for stopping by.

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malyntine November 25 2010, 17:15:35 UTC
Omg why!!!! D: Anyway just thought I'd let you know I really like the idea of Mik making Fei lose control. Besides being obviously hot, it makes a lot of sense because usually people who are control freaks in daily life are often secretly submissives (needing to relinquish control in one aspect of life, and all that). Love how you thought it through! :D

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linen_straps November 19 2010, 17:41:00 UTC
Mik does NOT have stubby fingers! *murders you*

Kidding. XD Actually, I was so busy ogling Mik's perfect butt and drooling all over the place, I couldn't do much of anything else for a while. XD

The situation with the egg tarts was funny. Same with the bun-kneading... but who could blame him?

"Whatever happened to Michelle?" "Which one?" Lol! XD

Although your description of this huge, massive "beastly" Russian with kinda raspy hands conjured up images of Nikolai Valuev - a 7 ft 2 in tall Russian boxer - rather than of Mik in my mind. XD Oh well, I guess Valuev is sort of adorable in his own, freaky, way. XD

This was fun, honey! Your oneshot as well as Jelly's awesome art. =)

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kajornwan November 20 2010, 00:16:45 UTC
Mik does NOT have stubby fingers! *murders you*
You're going to have to commit a double murder, because if I remember correctly, this was Alexis' idea (that I kind of like) :D *gets shot* And you're not kidding, that I know. ha ha

I can't blame you, I kept this drawing for personal ogling for a week when Jelly emailed me! *hugs Mik possessively*

Although your description of this huge, massive "beastly" Russian with kinda raspy hands conjured up images of Nikolai Valuev
Jesus, christ, do you have to do this to me? (Oh why the fuck did I just google that? *cries*) I'm bloody Asian, woman, the normal size men for me is Bruce Lee (and that's hard to come by already), and big and beastly means Marcus !!!!! *runs away crying her head off* I demand you make it up to me with enough Mik icons to wash away the image of Valuev!!!!!!! *goes cries some more*

Now I want to be Dory *sobs*

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linen_straps November 20 2010, 00:52:55 UTC
You're going to have to commit a double murder, because if I remember correctly, this was Alexis' idea
Oh well, can as well strangle her too, while I'm at it.

do you have to do this to me?
Yes. That's payback for the stubby fingers. Bwaha! *runs*

But seriously, Valuev is kinda adorable. Lots of people here like him. And rumor has it that he wooed his now-wifey with self-made poetry. I mean, come on! How awesome is that! XD She's very pretty, too, his wife. And tiny. But I guess it's not very hard to look tiny compared to him. XD

Marcus, on the other hand is... okay, who the fuck needs poetry... *licks screen*

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kajornwan November 20 2010, 02:20:23 UTC
But seriously, Valuev is kinda adorable.
When he's bigger than schwarzenegger and with so much hair, I have a hard time writing 'adorable' in the same sentence as his name LOL

Marcus, on the other hand is... okay, who the fuck needs poetry... *licks screen*

Well, I heard he's actually a self-absorbed jerk. But really, with those abs and that face, the importance of his personality can seem microscopic !! LOL *licks screen too*

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nekomurasaki November 19 2010, 23:34:37 UTC
Nice one! Glad to read this after a while.... Mik and Fei are hot! Kudos to Jelly-rie01 >_<

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kajornwan November 20 2010, 00:18:50 UTC
Thank you ^_^ Glad you could enjoy it more or less. It was just some weird fantasy I was having LOL Thanks for stopping by. Now I go post the next chapter of Revelation.

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portisheart November 20 2010, 11:13:06 UTC
i luv your OC Fei Long a lot! playful, sometimes ashamed of his own reactions when confronted with Mik's blunt call for animality, somehow he's so cuuute ^^ *runs from Fei Long's blade*. and Mik's shameless behavior in all circumstances is totally priceless. thx for the very imaged hot action at the end - gawd they did go for it! i wonder if Fei Long enjoyed much sitting for their after-sex pig meal XDD.
hmm.. i wouldn't mind an insight at the following events aka naked dance & cuffing *grin*

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kajornwan November 22 2010, 07:06:39 UTC
I'm glad you can enjoy this weird fantasy of mine. I think he's totally OOC but I kind of love to giggle imagining him that way. Strip dance & cuff is a temptation that I think I can see in my head but not have to skill to write XD So I may just keep it for my personal pleasure *hu hu*

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portisheart November 22 2010, 21:29:51 UTC
So I may just keep it for my personal pleasure *hu hu*

this, my dear, is called sadism.. *whine*

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char_comet November 20 2010, 12:45:09 UTC
Ohy I can accept that you are in love with Mikhail more than Fei Long, despite what you say, but don't you think you're exaggerating here at telling all those things? O____O

especially when the man possessed two-hundred pounds of pure muscle that had him kneading his steamed bun over just a minute ago.
or slamming his body parts on a nude Russian male with biceps the size of his thighs etc....
You always make him do the right thing, he's perfect...You know that sometimes praising too much a character (or a guy in real life) can cause the opposite effect than make him being loved by the others?
You could give him some lacks here and there and we'll love him the same, even more I'd tell XDDD (and now don't come and tell me that it's his obsession for Fei Long his weakeness)

Then when I read this...
the strong, substantial body that nearly double his own sizesomething shocked my mind!XD I got the wrong image of the "Giant with the child" that I absolutely refuse for Mikhail & Fei Long and generally speaking in yaoi relationships where ( ... )

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kajornwan November 22 2010, 07:47:17 UTC
Ohy I can accept that you are in love with Mikhail more than Fei Long, despite what you say, but don't you think you're exaggerating here at telling all those things? O____O

LOL I knew you were gonna say that. Despite what I say!! But yes, I am having fun fangirling over Mikhail, and yes, the whole point of this fic was actually exaggeration *gets shot*. As I wrote it was like, 'shit, I'm getting carried away' so you're totally right. Even though it's pure crap with hideous exaggeration, totally OOC, and the whole thing is a joke, I thought, 'why not?" XD So please, don't take this seriously. Think of it as something I post when I'm drunk with Vodka. LOL I shall try not to get drunk on lj again and suffer my readers. *promise*

You could give him some lacks here and there and we'll love him the same, even more I'd tell XDDD (and now don't come and tell me that it's his obsession for Fei Long his weakeness)No, I don't think it's his obsession for Fei that is his weakness. Although his knees are weak in front of Fei. But generally, ( ... )

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char_comet November 22 2010, 09:30:22 UTC
I think you're a bit wrong at thinking of all caucasians like giants and all asians like short guys. Other than this we're talking of characters that the author has showed us already and - even if taller - I don't see Mikhail doubling Fei at all...
And what about Asami? Isn't he an asian man too?
The most popular Fei Long from Street Fighter (he's of Hong Kong too) isn't different from the american or european figthers and you know there is a Thai figther "Sagat" who is a colossus? XD

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kajornwan November 22 2010, 09:57:22 UTC
Yes, Asami IS the most unrealistic character in the manga! The man is Japanese with gigantic body and a huge XXX! *gets shot*

But obviously I don't mean all. But we Asians are dwarfs compared to Americans or European (hell, even our tomatoes and fruits are the dwarf version!), and I'm talking 98% of the population. If you don't believe me, ask Franka XD But really, by double I dont' really mean height. I have a feeling Fei is roughly the same height as Mikhail, perhaps just a few cm. shorter. But I'm talking substance. Asians don't get those big muscles without steroids. Sorry about the confusion. My explanations in the fic isn't clear. Now I know why linen_Straps thought Valuev *cries her head off*

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