Thank you ^_^ I hope that didn't come out as weird. I thought they should have a talk and get it over with, all of them actually. Next chapter has been written but I think I'll rewrite it again so that will take time.
Woo~hoo. New Update *v*! Now I can indulge myself in this chapter until the next one comes along. It was a great chapter but hopefully the bruise on Fei's neck will go away soon. Mik will probably feel really bad about hurting Fei even though he didn't intent for that to happen. Now I just want to see Fei and Feodora kick some butts in whatever business they are heading off to do and eventually with Mik coming to the rescue. And maybe somewhere along the way...just maybe you could write a wedding between Mik and Fei. Maybe Mik can propose to Fei...? In the midst of a gun fight...? Now THAT would be super HOT and SEXY! Forgive me. I have WAY too much energy and it's making my imagination go haywire. But yes, Mik proposing to Fei in the midst of a gun fight would be super...! <3
Gosh, i love your enthusiasm that makes up for the lack of comments in this chapter XD Somehow I think the first butt Fei and Feodora might kick together would be Mikhail lol (wouldn't that be fun?) The poor guy had picked the most difficult kind of wife and lover of all should they ever gang up and turn on him.
But a proposal in the middle of a gun fight is a fabulous idea!!! I will have to steal that and credit you one day! I think the kiss that seals it will stop the shooting anyway, who wouldn't stop to look at something so hot? But that's the great thing about Mik x Fei, they are the couple who would probably do these kind of unconventional things. (Have you read To Ride a Bull? There's something kind of like this though).
Great to see you here and hope to not disappoint next chapter.
I am glad you like my enthusiasm AND the idea of a proposal in the middle of a gun fight. BTW I LOVE To Ride a Bull! It is super HOT and SEXY! I reread it so many times haha. It is actaully one of my favorite. Hot sex in a sexy car with two of the most sexy people (the sexiest couple).... What else could I ask for? Well...I guess how about next time have Fei do uke XD! Even though my mind is set on Fei being uke...To Ride a Bull was unbelievably amazing! It is just one of my many pet peeves...for uke to stay uke! Hehe. Many people would probably debate about Fei being uke with me. But in my eyes, Fei is 100% uke XD!! <3 Well at lease he is when he is paired with Mik or Asami! I can't wait for the next update! Good luck! :)
Are you sure that a Trilogy is going to have enough room for all of your evilness in it? x] Sorry for the late entrance. -ahems-
I held my breath for a second there at the lines:
“How do you do it?” Fei Long asked, wondering how she could go about her business as if everything in her life was normal.
“How do I do what?”
“Live...like this?”It all sounds so human that almost seems unreal. The amount of civilization here is just so apparent and profound; yet creepy on so many level as well, in a good way of course. But now at least Fei has one less thing on his mind to worry about and Mik is all now his to take! x3
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I am so late in replying but work has gotten the best of me! But I HAVE to return to reply this XD
Are you sure that a Trilogy is going to have enough room for all of your evilness in it? Do you suggest I go Harry Potter or GRRM's Game of Thrones on this?
I'm really glad you picked up the atmosphere on that "how do you do it?" scene. It was one of my favorite moments to write. One thing about Fei that I love is that he has such a big heart. He's been hurt so many times and yet he's always understanding and he never ever judges anyone. That's got to take strength forged from the fires of Mordor. Fei Long doesn't like to hate at all and Feodora is very mature IMO.
OMG the Wedding! Fei will wear a black tux and Mik in white!!! Mik: "I swear to cook, clean, and be a good wife!!" XDDD That's a great AU to try to write one day. Thank you so much for stopping by and help wake up my muse to write again.
I really like how you portate the feelings of your characters. Your writing is deep. I can almost feel the pain or anger or anything else that Mik, Fei and the others have. :)
Thank you so much for stopping by and I feel so guilty for being so late to thank you. A kind comment gets my muse going. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Will try to update soon.
i expected the combat of titans to be more brutal and go for much longer - but it seems Fei Long and Fedora have both intelligence and excellent control, as well as a very good understanding of Mik's personality and needs. Fei Long's offer to trade her title as Mik's companion for financial help to build her own syndicate is an awesome idea. she agreed pretty fast too. as they say, quit while you're ahead..
Mik half-waking up and almost strangling Fei Long shocked me, luckily nothing happened, Fei Long's stubbornness was admirable. he really installed himself into Mik's and Fedora's house, declared his rules, and made so clear he wasn't leaving, point dot. i didn't expect the scene with Mik crying on his dragon's shoulder, nor him actually talking with Fei Long. it's good the infos on no-sex-with-Alex etc have circulated - now all i hope is that Mik & Fei Long'll find to each other again. if it works, Mik's dependance'll only be some bad remembrance.
Combat of True Titans will come, and that is Asami VS Feodora which I guarantee to be even more delicious!!! I could let it go on, but for one thing I see Feodora as a very 'controlled' woman, Fei Long at this point is very 'focused', and most of all I'm bored and want to move on to something else now LOL *gets shot* As to agreeing pretty fast, you'll soon see why, the bitch isn't that simple. XD
i didn't expect the scene with Mik crying on his dragon's shoulder, nor him actually talking with Fei Long. Do you find it too fast? But don't worry, nothing is over,... far far from over.
Thanks again for stopping by despite your busy schedule. Now, where is my update? *gets shot*
P.S. Sorry for the late reply *is really busy too T_T*
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But a proposal in the middle of a gun fight is a fabulous idea!!! I will have to steal that and credit you one day! I think the kiss that seals it will stop the shooting anyway, who wouldn't stop to look at something so hot? But that's the great thing about Mik x Fei, they are the couple who would probably do these kind of unconventional things. (Have you read To Ride a Bull? There's something kind of like this though).
Great to see you here and hope to not disappoint next chapter.
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I held my breath for a second there at the lines:
“How do you do it?” Fei Long asked, wondering how she could go about her business as if everything in her life was normal.
“How do I do what?”
“Live...like this?”It all sounds so human that almost seems unreal. The amount of civilization here is just so apparent and profound; yet creepy on so many level as well, in a good way of course. But now at least Fei has one less thing on his mind to worry about and Mik is all now his to take! x3 ( ... )
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Are you sure that a Trilogy is going to have enough room for all of your evilness in it?
Do you suggest I go Harry Potter or GRRM's Game of Thrones on this?
I'm really glad you picked up the atmosphere on that "how do you do it?" scene. It was one of my favorite moments to write. One thing about Fei that I love is that he has such a big heart. He's been hurt so many times and yet he's always understanding and he never ever judges anyone. That's got to take strength forged from the fires of Mordor. Fei Long doesn't like to hate at all and Feodora is very mature IMO.
OMG the Wedding! Fei will wear a black tux and Mik in white!!! Mik: "I swear to cook, clean, and be a good wife!!" XDDD That's a great AU to try to write one day. Thank you so much for stopping by and help wake up my muse to write again.
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Mik half-waking up and almost strangling Fei Long shocked me, luckily nothing happened, Fei Long's stubbornness was admirable. he really installed himself into Mik's and Fedora's house, declared his rules, and made so clear he wasn't leaving, point dot. i didn't expect the scene with Mik crying on his dragon's shoulder, nor him actually talking with Fei Long. it's good the infos on no-sex-with-Alex etc have circulated - now all i hope is that Mik & Fei Long'll find to each other again. if it works, Mik's dependance'll only be some bad remembrance.
now, who the hell is John Wong?
thx for the update hun <3
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i didn't expect the scene with Mik crying on his dragon's shoulder, nor him actually talking with Fei Long.
Do you find it too fast? But don't worry, nothing is over,... far far from over.
Thanks again for stopping by despite your busy schedule. Now, where is my update? *gets shot*
P.S. Sorry for the late reply *is really busy too T_T*
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