[fic] retribution Seven

Aug 02, 2011 07:50

Title: Retribution Seven ( Read more... )

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nikkita_maldita September 13 2011, 09:03:58 UTC
I am so loving this chapter!As always, you did a wonderful job. I so didn't expect to like Feodora she's one sassy bitch and I like the fact that like Yoh; she's willing to go through heartaches if it means Mik is going to be happy(maybe she and Yoh ought to make a partnership so they can safeguard Fei's and Mik's interests.XD). I absolutely adore the conversation Feilong and Feodorahad, especially the "I'm expensive" and "I'm rich" part.lol

I'm so relieved that the detoxification went well and I hope Misha doesnt relapse. He needs to get himself together and update his collection. I'd love to see his usual self driving an Aventador!

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shiranui22 February 28 2012, 21:13:51 UTC
Awesome chapter! I very very much love the bacelet/handcuff and Fei becoming the living-handcuff part.
It's great to see Fei finally strong and caring for Mikhail ^^ . It's about time, now he at long last knows what he wants and will (hopefully) go for it. But the last few passages promised that quite well.

And I also loved the interaction between Feodora and Fei. This decend conversation was kind of amusing and refreshing.

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chibi_tenipuri March 24 2012, 14:41:01 UTC
I'm glad fei is starting to walk on the right path. To be honest, I applaud feodora, she suffers yet she does what she thinks is right for the ones she cares. I can't wait for their counterattack on the bastards who killed alexi *evil laugh*.

Great chapter as always. :) x

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kpopangel May 4 2017, 15:38:56 UTC
Aww man.. cliffhanger *not a problem though, I can just click on to next chapter :P the privilege of reading this way later than everyone else ;P*

Phew.. I thought Feodora could be more hostile towards her rival. But anyway, I believe she's admitted defeat seeing how Fei stayed by her husband's side, no matter how dangerous he is. And he's even unlocking his handcuff! :)

I'm glad that Fei made that explanation to Mikhail, that nothing happened between him and Alexei that night. In fact, I thought that long ago, he should've told Mikhail too that the first time he was taken by force. So, in a consensual way, he's only with his brother once. Anyway, not that it matters now, I guess.

Thanks for another thrilling roller-coaster ride, author~san. As always, you did a very great job. I wonder how you did it.

I read the 1st and 2nd (partly on AO3 site) since yesterday, and today I'm on the 3rd. And there's no way I'm feeling bored of it.

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