Thank you. I'm glad I could bring them to this point too, which is really the point of this long fic ^_^ And yes, they took Fei *rubs hands for the action to come* Thanks for stopping by and leave me your thoughts.
Hi. Sorry I just came back from vacation and am still trying to catch up with work. I am working on it but my free time is extremely tight and I can't promise when I can update. Thank you so much though for letting me know you enjoyed it and I hope I can update soon (enough)
Spot! New chapter. This is amazing! I am getting such a mix feeling on this. I love the fact that Fei is finally over Asami, but my heart still kind of ached when it is finally over. And I can't believe it! You wrote about AxA! Arghh... I was going to skip it, but I ended reading it anyways. I acutally don't know what to say about that haha. Asami seemed a little too "soft", maybe that is because he just got a huge blow to his ego after being "reject". I swear Fei would be the only person to be able to deny sex for Asami. I chuckled reading that part. The end where Asami said he did care for Fei was definitly a bitter sweet moment. I love all you subtle little AsamiXFei moments
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Long comment *yay* I'm glad I didn't disappoint you too much. My heart ached too about A x F, really. But it's about time. And as for A x A lol I don't know why but I wanted to give them a try. I do realize my Asami is a bit soft and that's the reason why I'm so insecure about it. They are a hard couple to move for me. I've been fed up with A x A never moving anywhere and wanted to give it a go. I suppose giving Asami a feeling deeper than being horny is very tricky and not quite like him lol. But yes, I also agree Fei would be the only person who CAN manipulate Asami sexually, well, he can do that to anyone
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Of course you did not disappoint, you never do. No matter how I hard I try, I don't see AxA going anywhere so it just seems a little to me. But I definitely understand what you mean by moving on on Fei's part. God! Fei and his sex appeal, argh... He could manipulate anyone without having to do anything. Asami is soft, but I don't see any other way for AxA to get somewhere unless Asami changes his personality. So in a way it is just like what I have said all along, unless Asami was to have a personality change, AxA will never get anywhere.
Have Mik and Fei tie up all the loose ends in a final showdown or something like that. And for the baby...Can't you just kill Feodora so Mik and Fei can raise the baby together? I would love to see Mik trying to feed and change the baby. And of course there is Tao and Yoh to worry about. Some many characters!
I have been coming up with a story of my own to write about lately. I must say it is super weird. I blame it on my horrible sense of humor haha. Hopefully it will go somewhere.
When I read "adultery" in your warning, I thought it was related to Feodora (cheating on Mikhail, for some strange reason, before they divorced). This because in the past, when I complained about your Fei Long sleeping with this and that man, it seems to me that you usually replied telling that for men it's different, that they have often sex without committing so it isn't a real betrayal (adultery) for them. Then I realized you put the adultery warning as if you were making sure that you consider AxA as a consolidated couple....were you trying to protect yourself from the anger of the AxA fans stating that Fei Long could not separate them?:-P The chapter is very long and I can understand how hard has been for you going through all of this but...couldn't you spare us such an evil final part? =_=
Yes, that adultery thingy was for A x A XD I feel like I've committed a crime here against everyone from A x A, to Mik x Fei, to Fei who might be called a slut again (which I don't agree because men simply get to sleep around without being called as such - and women shouldn't either for that matter). But I did strongly feel that it was needed to get rid of all the Asami illusions. The hand job left Fei hanging, you know what I mean? I think deep down Fei wants to know what it feels like to be Asami's lover, and now that he knows it sucks, he can finally leave it all behind.
Evil final part needs to be there. Yan and Toh are still alive and they need something to do! I refuse to not tie up lose ends like YA. But this is the final showdown and you will not hate it, I promise. We've had too many Fei in distress to last us a lifetime. Like I said, you may be right about me liking Mikhail a bit more than Fei, because I now have more fun torturing Mik than him XD
Thanks for stopping by and leave me your thoughts. *hugs*
Ah. YA's Feilong probably only ever slept with Aki... (some Chinese fans jokingly said Aki was Feilong's first sexual partner). He's so far away from the word "slut"...
I don't believe for a second that Asami didn't have at least 2-digits numbers of partners before Aki or even after Aki (given his age and appetite and prowess). But of course, in female fantasy land, men/seme must be in a sexual frenzy but only ever sleeps with one person.
And of course, in female fantasy land, no matter how many people Aki/uke/"the woman" sleeps with, as long as it's depicted as "he/she didn't want it, they just can't resist him/her", it's fine. I guess that is why rape-fantasy is so prevalent in Yaoi and other female oriented works.
I think it was actually quite brave of YA to do a semi-sex scene between the seme/"the other man" in Splendor of High Loft, and didn't depict it as something completely bad, but rather with melancholy and some feelings.
I loved this chapter, finally the closing that I was waiting in the relationship of these two! But I must say that you are cruel ... ¿Fei Kidnapped?...¿¿¿How you leave in this part???!! ¿What will happen to my gorgeous Fei??? ... Yan is behind this? If so, I tell you that one of the girls who are reading the fic in Spanish, loves Yan Tsui ... She's gonna die of joy if you write something with him and his brother, this girl is a bit depraved and likes action between brothers xD... although on second thought, I would also like read something like that.... hahahha OMG I'm pervert too!! xD Well, as always me and my madness... Pleaseeeeeee don't take too long, I think I can't stand it ... T_T Thanks for this, I will be awaiting anxiously the next chapter! Take care and have fun ... Beware of the lions, you can't die without finishing this XD
Yes, finally. I've been wanting to get them to this part for so long. Now I can finally move on to something new for Fei. Glad you enjoyed it.
As for kidnapped Fei, well, you know Yan and Toh are still there, and I intend to tie up all lose ends with this fic, once and for all - hence the final showdown. Fei will have to get over ASami, his father's death, Yan, Yoh, and Toh (and then ship Tao off to a boarding school somewhere already) before CI ends which will give him a true happy ending. Oh Yan will have a big part after this too and there will definitely be Fei and Yan interaction. I need the two brothers to come to terms in someway. And I'm one of the biggest Fei vs. Yan fan. I get so excited every time I see Yan in a fic but I love writing him seriously as a person with even bigger mental problems than Fei. I can't wait to write him ^_^
Thanks for the comment and the wish! I shall try to come back alive!
Just awesome. The only way I can accept any Asami/Fei Long action is the way you just wrote it- to make Fei realize his true feelings for Mikhail and to settle things between them once and for all.
I just hope Mikhail and Fei can come to terms now even though I fear that due to what was announced in the last chapter this wont be that easy... can't you just let them be happy? *sobs*
Wow, that's a great compliment. Thank you. Honestly I used to be a die hard A x F fan and I couldn't stand Aki. But really, when you think about it, A x A is right for each other and Asami would never stay sane with Fei's demanding nature while Fei would never stay sane either with Asami's reluctance to commit or be nice. A x F is a great idea but they probably won't last. But you know me, I'm Mik x Fei FOREVER XD
Sure I can let them be happy, but that will take a lot of time and fixing ^_^ Thanks for stopping by and let me know your thoughts.
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Have Mik and Fei tie up all the loose ends in a final showdown or something like that. And for the baby...Can't you just kill Feodora so Mik and Fei can raise the baby together? I would love to see Mik trying to feed and change the baby. And of course there is Tao and Yoh to worry about. Some many characters!
I have been coming up with a story of my own to write about lately. I must say it is super weird. I blame it on my horrible sense of humor haha. Hopefully it will go somewhere.
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Then I realized you put the adultery warning as if you were making sure that you consider AxA as a consolidated couple....were you trying to protect yourself from the anger of the AxA fans stating that Fei Long could not separate them?:-P
The chapter is very long and I can understand how hard has been for you going through all of this but...couldn't you spare us such an evil final part? =_=
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Evil final part needs to be there. Yan and Toh are still alive and they need something to do! I refuse to not tie up lose ends like YA. But this is the final showdown and you will not hate it, I promise. We've had too many Fei in distress to last us a lifetime. Like I said, you may be right about me liking Mikhail a bit more than Fei, because I now have more fun torturing Mik than him XD
Thanks for stopping by and leave me your thoughts. *hugs*
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I don't believe for a second that Asami didn't have at least 2-digits numbers of partners before Aki or even after Aki (given his age and appetite and prowess). But of course, in female fantasy land, men/seme must be in a sexual frenzy but only ever sleeps with one person.
And of course, in female fantasy land, no matter how many people Aki/uke/"the woman" sleeps with, as long as it's depicted as "he/she didn't want it, they just can't resist him/her", it's fine. I guess that is why rape-fantasy is so prevalent in Yaoi and other female oriented works.
I think it was actually quite brave of YA to do a semi-sex scene between the seme/"the other man" in Splendor of High Loft, and didn't depict it as something completely bad, but rather with melancholy and some feelings.
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But I must say that you are cruel ... ¿Fei Kidnapped?...¿¿¿How you leave in this part???!! ¿What will happen to my gorgeous Fei??? ... Yan is behind this? If so, I tell you that one of the girls who are reading the fic in Spanish, loves Yan Tsui ... She's gonna die of joy if you write something with him and his brother, this girl is a bit depraved and likes action between brothers xD... although on second thought, I would also like read something like that.... hahahha OMG I'm pervert too!! xD
Well, as always me and my madness... Pleaseeeeeee don't take too long, I think I can't stand it ... T_T
Thanks for this, I will be awaiting anxiously the next chapter!
Take care and have fun ... Beware of the lions, you can't die without finishing this XD
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As for kidnapped Fei, well, you know Yan and Toh are still there, and I intend to tie up all lose ends with this fic, once and for all - hence the final showdown. Fei will have to get over ASami, his father's death, Yan, Yoh, and Toh (and then ship Tao off to a boarding school somewhere already) before CI ends which will give him a true happy ending. Oh Yan will have a big part after this too and there will definitely be Fei and Yan interaction. I need the two brothers to come to terms in someway. And I'm one of the biggest Fei vs. Yan fan. I get so excited every time I see Yan in a fic but I love writing him seriously as a person with even bigger mental problems than Fei. I can't wait to write him ^_^
Thanks for the comment and the wish! I shall try to come back alive!
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I just hope Mikhail and Fei can come to terms now even though I fear that due to what was announced in the last chapter this wont be that easy... can't you just let them be happy? *sobs*
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Sure I can let them be happy, but that will take a lot of time and fixing ^_^ Thanks for stopping by and let me know your thoughts.
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