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kajornwan

[fic] Retribution Eleven

Apr 30, 2012 16:34

A relatively fast(er) update given my life at the moment. I hope you guys are still here.

Title: Retribution Eleven
Rating: PG-13
Warning: None
Characters: Fei Long, Mikhail, Yan
Spoiler: Spoiler for NT arc
Disclaimer: All characters belong to YA sensei.
Beta: angel0399Previous Chapters: For new readers, 'Retribution' is the third arc of a Mik x Fei ( Read more... )

Comments 43

hi!!!!!!!!! anonymous July 20 2012, 01:54:18 UTC

hi, is the first time I write to someone in yaoi fics, but yours is simply the best, I love, you have a lovely way to wrap the plot, I would like to upgrade it will not falter, this super interesting, almost no I can sleep as nothing but continue to think: no more to add just the desire that it go on and you fill this vacuum that I have to know the then arigatou

Re: hi!!!!!!!!! kajornwan July 20 2012, 07:02:18 UTC

Hi there. I'm so flattered to have your first comment. It does make me want to keep writing. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and hope to fill the missing chapters very soon, although my time is very limited these days. The new chapter is coming, I think, this month. Stay tuned and I hope I don't disappoint.

Thanks again for stopping by.

satsuki82 anonymous July 21 2012, 06:18:17 UTC

where are you? I need one more chapter to live

Re: satsuki82 kajornwan July 21 2012, 13:57:21 UTC

I believe that qualitfies as the most inspiring comment ever! XD I'm still alive and the new chapter is coming very soon. I'm 11 pages into it. Sorry ^^! been soo busy these days. Thanks for poking me though.

anonymous July 25 2012, 12:38:14 UTC

Oh lord no word of a lie, I'm checking this everyday. D: It's too good for words! Love love love ~

Will there ever be a scene of Mikhail and Fei comparing the scars on their backs? I think that could be surprisingly touching and intimate.

Anyway keep it up and I'm so eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. :3 *waves Mik x Fei flag*

- Erebus

kajornwan July 26 2012, 04:48:41 UTC

Thank you for checking this everyday! You know you can sign up for an lj account and track me. That way whenever I post something lj will notify you by email ^_^ The new chapter is being beta-ed, until it is returned to me I can't tell you when I can update, usually within days though ^_^

I would love to write that scene one day once (and if) they get back together. Now that Fei knows Mkhail's worth, I suppose Fei will gush over him perhaps even more so than Tao XD

Thanks again for stopping by to let me know we have another wonderful MikxFei on our team! I am also writing chapter 13, so that won't be long either. ^_-

jamie310 August 3 2012, 01:12:44 UTC

That most fantastic chapter yet<>

kajornwan August 3 2012, 10:39:49 UTC

Thank you! The next one is coming soon. It's being beta-ed. ^_^ I hope you will like it as well.

kpopangel May 4 2017, 17:35:31 UTC

The background story of Fei's mother was so sad. So today's chaos was all thanks to the Sr. Toh :( How I wish Fei's mom would just seek Liu's protection instead of choosing suicide.

Now Fei should not think lowly of himself anymore. His mother and adoptive father did love him..

And Mikhail's back! With his love for Feilong too, on top of that! ♡