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kajornwan

[fic]Retribution Thirteen

Aug 08, 2012 15:34

No, you're not hallucinating and this is not a repeated post of that chapter I put out last Saturday. It is a new update, believe it or not. But this is what I call a muse attack, and this chapter she attacks..hard ( Read more... )

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immorta_beloved August 8 2012, 12:47:32 UTC

...I have no words for this... really I don't ( ... )

kajornwan August 10 2012, 00:21:45 UTC

Thank you so much for your amazing comment as always. And really, damn you, in a way, because I was thinking about quitting this since no one seems to be reading and go work on my original story which might actually make some money, but no, with readers like you still on board, this is worth finishing ( ... )

immorta_beloved August 8 2012, 13:03:15 UTC

PS: maybe a Fanart of our Fei covered in whipped cream, like you said in the comments of Retribution 12, could help you find your inspiration for the next chapter?? XD

I'm only joking, take your time!!! ^_^ I'm not joking about the fanart though, I had asked you the permission to draw an alternate ending for revelation, one that included a whipped cream covered Fei XD

kajornwan August 10 2012, 00:25:09 UTC

I have the plot and the inspiration XD But writing this means I have to take work and family time to write, and if almost no one is reading it, and this is not out of spite, it is just not worth throwing work and family time away until I actually do have time to write, and that can take, yeah, 6 months.

narcx006 August 8 2012, 13:59:30 UTC

Woow. This was an intense chapter!!! Very exciting full of tension between characters ( ... )

kajornwan August 10 2012, 00:36:00 UTC

I'm glad you are enjoying this. I enjoyed writing AxA quite a lot, especially Aki who never seems to think about anything in the manga. MIk vs Tao was, I admit, one of my most satisfying write in this chapter. I had long wanted to make a man out of Tao and get rid of the crying baby in my life (hell, my children stopped crying when they turn 4 and I am so not putting up with a lame 14 yrs boy in what is suppose to be my fantasy!XD) I love the other side of MIk, truly. I have always written him with Fei, and with Fei he is a sweetheart. With others, the opposite and I only get to show this properly now. I'm glad you liked it too. (This is so weird a coincidence, really, that my MIk and Alexis' Mik decides to show the ugly side at the same time lol)

What comes next? A lot of tears...*runs* (but not from Tao, or we will have to find a nursery)

I would die happy too, if sensei were to draw the next few scenes of Mikhail that I had in mind.

gryffin_draco August 8 2012, 14:37:06 UTC

You're most welcome! Let me know when this one is done since my LJ visits are spotty at best, and I'd likely miss the last chapter update. I'll happily pdf it :) I think I have most of the others pdf'd. Let me check my folder today.

gryffin_draco August 8 2012, 15:06:56 UTC

Got them!

Heavenly Win
Paradise Day
To Ride A Bull

kajornwan August 10 2012, 00:37:41 UTC

Wow, thank you. I will let you know when it is done (possibly in ten years at the rate I am going lol). Thanks for the other links too! *hugs* it is such a lot of work that I don't even want to think about doing it. This is a huge help!

thegreencloud August 8 2012, 18:10:15 UTC

wow, I haven't even posted a comment on the other chapter and we get an update so fast.

I like how catty and strong Fei is being and not melodramatic. Plus it's not the typical "I shall torture you by raping you" way that we see in yaoi (I've gotten so used to it that I don't mind though). I did get slightly outraged at Mik hitting Tao. I mean I get it but yeah...

don't make us wait 6 months ;_; maybe you'll write faster if the novel is about Mik/Fei ;)

kajornwan August 10 2012, 00:46:28 UTC

I used to update once a week, I tell you XD oh thoses days ARE gone ( ... )