I've wasted enough time not updating, and for that I deserve every brick, so without further ramblings, here it is, an update. Enjoy throwing tomatoes at me Title: Retribution Eighteen
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I... What? What!? WHAT???? ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME, WOMAN!? GIVE ME BACK THE FLOOR YOU JUST VAPORISED FROM UNDER MY FEET, YOU DEMON!!!! I MEAN, SERIOUSLY, "Who are you?"?!?! CURSE YOU TO ALL THE HELLS OF ALL THE WORLD'S RELIGIONS!!!!
*writhes with rage and pain* So it's not enough that you make us go AGAIN through an emotional wringer and roller-coaster of a chapter. Desperation, and determination, and OMG heartbreaking Angel!Alexei again, and THAT SHOT, and my stupid Yoh who finally gets it for himself, and blargh!Asami, and and and! And when finally, finally, Fei Long has managed to turn his heart inside out out of love for Mikhail, you drop THAT on us!?
I HAAAAAATE YOU! I'm not even a MxF, but I hate you all the same!
Of course, I know you'll set it all right in the next chapter, BUT THAT WAS STILL FUCKING CRUEL, WOMAN
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NOW THAT'S A TOMATO TO TREASURE! There's nothing more fulfilling to me than being stoned to death by my readers over the torture of my characters *gets shot*. I will admit to killing Alexei just for the thrill of it (WTF is wrong with me?). But really, thank you for coming here to read even when you're going through a difficult time, thank you for getting with flying colors what I wanted to write, and for feeling exactly how I had intended readers to feel. If that doesn't keep me writing, then I don't know what will.
Of course, I know you'll set it all right in the next chapter, BUT THAT WAS STILL FUCKING CRUEL, WOMAN!How do you know for sure I'll set it all right? I have never promised a happy ending :P *gets bricked* Well at least it's not the ending I first had in mind. I was going to have Mikhail sacrifice his life to save Fei Long, by telling Yoh to drag him away from dying Mikhail, and so begins a new arc with YxF stuck together in fucking purgatory, where I could write angst after angst after glorious angst about 300
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LOL! So what you want more than anything as a writer is your very own virtual Tomatina :D ? That's... original, for sure :P
thank you for coming here to read even when you're going through a difficult time,
I need fun, and this is a GREAT kind of fun :D
thank you for getting with flying colors what I wanted to write, and for feeling exactly how I had intended readers to feel
Thank yourself for those ones! I'm not gonna take credit for just reading. You wrote the words, you made me feel all the feels, you get the credit.
How do you know for sure I'll set it all right? I have never promised a happy ending :P
Because I need Mikhail and Fei Long out of the way in order to be free to dream of Yoh and Feodora getting together :P So I'll keep on hoping for now that MxF get their happy ending
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That's... original, for sure :P LOL I happen to love books that make me want to strangle the writer to death in the "you-unimaginable-bitch-you!" kind of way, not for creating glittering vampires. So yeah, I totally take it as flattery. XD
Oh Yoh and Feodora will get together. Who else is going to change the diaper? Feodora?
if Mikhail doesn't die but doesn't love Fei Long anymore Then I will have to rewrite the whole damn thing because that man exists for the sole purpose of loving Fei!! He has no value otherwise XD
Though it wouldn't technically be YxF, but YxFxDead!M Oh it was supposed to be a one sided Y=>F, a one sided F=>dead Mik, a one sided Alexei =>Fei (only I fucked up and killed Alexei prematurely *cries*). And because Fei is now in love with a dead man, the whole universe suffers. Truly though, I've always had a weak spot for I-can't-compete-with-a-dead-man stories. That has to hurt so bad.
I'll have to be very careful before reading your books.I'm not sure ifI can accomplish what I intended to do, but this is
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The first time round,I have to admit I stopped reading when Feodora and Alexej entered the picture...but now something has "clicked", I think I understand a little more, am gradually ready to let those impressive personas "take me by the hand", for a while, see where they lead me...oh, Misha. (And oh, Yoh!!!)
The first time round,I have to admit I stopped reading when Feodora and Alexej entered the picture
May I ask what bothered you? I'm just curious. Any flaws I might have I'd like to know to improve my writing ^_^ Please don't be afraid to tell me when you catch something. I'm one of those people who request her beta to be brutally honest *is sick*
Thank you for stopping by to read and I hope work wasn't too cruel!
It has nothing to do with flaws.It was just that I had freshly discovered Flower on the High Loft (Summer 2012), and was fiercely and exclusively burning for Fei Long. First with Asami/Fei Long...but I guess I entered the fandom too late for that. The cold way Asami looks at Fei in NT, on the Casino ship...! Worse than shooting at him, somehow, lol. No. Then - I ignited for Mik/Fei. This pairing seemed realistic, somehow, before FnR. (Yoh's awesomely romantic, but somehow I just couldn't see that happen!) Back then I was still on ffnet, and actually tried reading CI in French lol I was AWEFULLY frustrated lol
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Oh the OC and you-put-a-woman-in-my-yaoi issue!! LOL I totally get you though. They annoy me sometimes when I read fanfiction. But I think that most people who do tend to always be unfair to their OC, using them just to make something happen and never giving us a chance to love them. There were a few fics though that I thought did a wonderful job. CI is actually my first fanfiction ever and I had absolutely no idea how to write one, so I couldn't help throwing in a few OCs (bad habit XD). I'm glad you are willing to experience them now and I hope they don't disappoint.
Thank you for your support and your kind words. As always, anything catches your eyes (especially if you ever read my original), please let me know. I hope the last chapter will not suck.
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*writhes with rage and pain* So it's not enough that you make us go AGAIN through an emotional wringer and roller-coaster of a chapter. Desperation, and determination, and OMG heartbreaking Angel!Alexei again, and THAT SHOT, and my stupid Yoh who finally gets it for himself, and blargh!Asami, and and and! And when finally, finally, Fei Long has managed to turn his heart inside out out of love for Mikhail, you drop THAT on us!?
I HAAAAAATE YOU! I'm not even a MxF, but I hate you all the same!
Of course, I know you'll set it all right in the next chapter, BUT THAT WAS STILL FUCKING CRUEL, WOMAN ( ... )
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Of course, I know you'll set it all right in the next chapter, BUT THAT WAS STILL FUCKING CRUEL, WOMAN!How do you know for sure I'll set it all right? I have never promised a happy ending :P *gets bricked* Well at least it's not the ending I first had in mind. I was going to have Mikhail sacrifice his life to save Fei Long, by telling Yoh to drag him away from dying Mikhail, and so begins a new arc with YxF stuck together in fucking purgatory, where I could write angst after angst after glorious angst about 300 ( ... )
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thank you for coming here to read even when you're going through a difficult time,
I need fun, and this is a GREAT kind of fun :D
thank you for getting with flying colors what I wanted to write, and for feeling exactly how I had intended readers to feel
Thank yourself for those ones! I'm not gonna take credit for just reading. You wrote the words, you made me feel all the feels, you get the credit.
How do you know for sure I'll set it all right? I have never promised a happy ending :P
Because I need Mikhail and Fei Long out of the way in order to be free to dream of Yoh and Feodora getting together :P So I'll keep on hoping for now that MxF get their happy ending ( ... )
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LOL I happen to love books that make me want to strangle the writer to death in the "you-unimaginable-bitch-you!" kind of way, not for creating glittering vampires. So yeah, I totally take it as flattery. XD
Oh Yoh and Feodora will get together. Who else is going to change the diaper? Feodora?
if Mikhail doesn't die but doesn't love Fei Long anymore
Then I will have to rewrite the whole damn thing because that man exists for the sole purpose of loving Fei!! He has no value otherwise XD
Though it wouldn't technically be YxF, but YxFxDead!M
Oh it was supposed to be a one sided Y=>F, a one sided F=>dead Mik, a one sided Alexei =>Fei (only I fucked up and killed Alexei prematurely *cries*). And because Fei is now in love with a dead man, the whole universe suffers. Truly though, I've always had a weak spot for I-can't-compete-with-a-dead-man stories. That has to hurt so bad.
I'll have to be very careful before reading your books.I'm not sure ifI can accomplish what I intended to do, but this is ( ... )
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More later, off to work for now...
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May I ask what bothered you? I'm just curious. Any flaws I might have I'd like to know to improve my writing ^_^ Please don't be afraid to tell me when you catch something. I'm one of those people who request her beta to be brutally honest *is sick*
Thank you for stopping by to read and I hope work wasn't too cruel!
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Thank you for your support and your kind words. As always, anything catches your eyes (especially if you ever read my original), please let me know. I hope the last chapter will not suck.
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Glad you like that part. I thought Yoh was brilliant in slapping Fei out of his misery with his scary secretary way ha ha
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