[fic] Falling from Heaven (CI prequel): Chapter 1

[kajornwan]

While I wait for the next chapter of Obsidian to be beta-ed, I thought I would do something even more suicidal. This probably qualifies me as a heretic to my own religion, but I can't help it. Here it is, the prequel of CI that is almost an original in its own right. A surprise gift for Shandini who's going through a difficult time, and those who have come

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[zsuzsapo]

[kajornwan]

Hi! Awww, *hugs* how is your brother? I can't imagine what you're going through. Please let me know if I can help cheer you up with anything. This fic at least, will be happy and fluffy for a while before it gets sad. Actually the sad part is probably just one last chapter, if that helps.

I'm glad you find Alejandro cute. I really enjoyed writing him. But as for immediately wanting to jump on Mik, I had wanted it to be a love at first sight, and a desperate one at that which would make Alejandro jump in without thinking and falling too deep and too blindly when he should have seen the signs. On another note, he his a guy, and this is simply comparable to guys seeing a really hot girl that is his type and wanting to sleep with her right away. IS it really rushed? >_The thought of making this more of a prequel to the one shots never occurred to me actually... But I did make this a prequel to CI because this will soon lead to Mikhail turning gay and heading to Macau. I'm glad you are still remembering those one shots though. That's

[zsuzsapo]

Ура, продолжение!

[anonymous]

Please, go on!
But could you write some more fluffy staff about Mik and Fei? Like they are happy together after Retribution and Mik is trying to remember and etc. ?
Пожалуйста-пожалуйста-пожалуйста!

From Russia with love.

Re: Ура, продолжение!

[kajornwan]

Thank you for the love!! I do intend to write some one shots after Retribution for sure, don't worry ^_^ Thanks for stopping by an for the encouragement. Good to see their fans are still around.

Re: Ура, продолжение!

[anonymous]

Actually, I discovered your fiction about 3 weeks ago;)
Its very easy for me to be still enthusiastic!
Anyway, i really love your style. Great work.
Best wishes.

Re: Ура, продолжение!

[kajornwan]

Oh.. compared to those who have been here for 7 years, that is relatively easy! XD I hope to not disappoint.

[kajornwan]

Well you don't need to read the previous one XD It would be best to keep that resolution to last really. This is the beginning of it all.

I AM drowned in Obsidian in ways that I haven't touched anything else for the last three weeks. Rewriting is hard and I am now feeling as if I've set out to do something beyond my capabilities. It is such a good practice to try to push yourself to do something better and more professionally though. Obsidian is being nitpicked in terms of writing skills paragraph by paragraph to make it as good as possible and I'm writing at sloth speed now trying to make as little mistake as possible. Anyway, I do hope you enjoy the completely rewritten two chapters. It will be a while. Alexis has little time to herself and I have little time to work on it.

[kajornwan]

Well,boy I'm glad I wrote it if you enjoyed it! :D Feodora will be appearing a LOT like in Retribution. It is as much an excuse to write her as it is to write Alexei really. She and Alejandro will have a great encounter that hopefully I can write well enough!

Oh the Adonis things. Mikhail was smiling at Fei because Feodora has called him that too XD But he looks so Adonis in my mind *_*

LOL I don't know if I can ever write uke Mik but he will be dominated a lot in here which should be fun to write really.

*hugs* Thank you so much for your unfailing support. I hope to be able to update soon.

[alexolgicant]

More, more, more; sorry for being absent for so long; i was in the middle of something, but it was a pleasure to find two up dates,  once for the chapter 5, which i must say i loved it (i had to read it twice) and this one, please make it a bit long; like 4 chapter's,  there was something that put them together so please explain it and make it a beautiful one.

thank you for these and please keep going I will be waiting for the next one.

[kajornwan]

Hey there, long time so see ^_^ Good to hear you enjoyed this and Paradise. For this it will be long, don't worry. You should know by now I'm incapable of writing anything that short (even my one shot turns out to have sequels!!) I am already writing the next chapter. I hope it will not disappoint.