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kajornwan

[fic] Falling from Heaven (CI prequel): Chapter 2

Sep 20, 2014 11:33

This has been sitting on my hard drive for the past three weeks waiting to be edited one last time and until now I hadn't been able to pull myself away from LOGH which makes everything I ever write seems like a bad joke. And because I'm not entirely out of that universe, I apologize in advance if this turns out to be the biggest crap of the year ( Read more... )

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shandini September 20 2014, 16:05:05 UTC

.... I WANT MORE!!! Don't dare to stop writing this. >_

kajornwan September 30 2014, 01:34:20 UTC

LOL Thank you. Glad I could give you some entertainment. I'll finish this one too if only for you. Meanwhile you can go watch Legends of Galactic Heroes and force me to write a Kircheis x Reinhard (which is essentially YohxFei) trilogy. *is waiting to be pushed*

shandini October 1 2014, 18:55:26 UTC

I think it isn't just me who wants more.... Much more.

But... but... I like Legends of Galactic Heroes. But if I force you to write a whole trilogy, the possibility for a YohxFei or AsamixFei will be lowered to under 1%. T_____T

But... if it makes you happy, you can write whatever you want. I will read it anyway. ;) I just love your stories. I think I even would read a Twilight fanfic from you... Let's all hope that this will never happen. O_O

So go! Write a Ginga Eiyu Densetsu fanfic!

kajornwan October 2 2014, 01:34:32 UTC

OMG You watch LOGH? O_O Did you finish it? Aren't you a bit too young to be watching this stuff though? XDDD I thought it would be really boring for those under 30!!

TBH I can't write an LOGH fic even if I wanted to. It requires the level of intelligence and maturity I don't possess. I could perhaps write them when they were like..12 LOL After 13 these two boys would probably be smarter than I am. *cries* I'll just degraded them into lovesick, childish commanders that the VF casts are and the galactic lovebirds are much much bigger than this (LOL I keep imagining His Excellency watching the VF Mafia lords going:

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alexolgicant September 24 2014, 02:39:13 UTC

please more, we deserve it! i really love this mean Alexei he is even more evil than before I simply adore him! thank you and please don make me wait for so long i beg you!

kajornwan September 30 2014, 01:41:05 UTC

Thank you! So glad some are still willing to read this! I will certainly write more as I too just love writing evil Alexei XDD

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kajornwan September 30 2014, 02:02:55 UTC

Thank you *_* I have been worried about Alejandro's acceptance by readers really but personally I am growing attached to how different he is from Fei and I wanted him to be that way because the point of this story is showing that Mikhail is really made for Fei and no one else. He acts very differently to all his other love interests even for his first man like Alejandro, and despite what every one fears this is a story about one-sided love that is going to end badly one way or another, because, well, Mikhail was born to love Fei Long and no one else. I really look forward to writing the disaster this is going to bring.

Alexei is always such a joy to write XD I'm glad you guys seem to be enjoying him as much as I do.

The scene at the beginning - the one about Alexei manipulating people into giving him what he wanted - made me laugh. Cos I actually do that too, though I'm probably more demanding than Alexei.
LOL you and my son are the same! My 6-year old was born with the ability to coax people with his words and the problem is even ( ... )

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kajornwan October 4 2014, 04:56:15 UTC

I've never actually tried that trick on a girl, though. Well, not in that way.

You might have done it unconsciously though LOL Because if it comes naturally to you you probably aren't aware of your own manipulation XD

"Are you really a guy?"
I might not have agreed with such stereotype but watching Ashwin when he was a little over a year old develop a love at first sight with toy cars I have a feeling the love of cars is written in the men's genes? Of course, you should find it remarkable to be different! ^_^

I've watched the first episode actually. But I'm having a hard time getting into the rest.It's not an easy show to watch and you would either love it to death or hate it. I will say this though, that I won't recommend LOGH to those who have a hard time imagining Mikhail beyond what the manga offers or fail to see the problem behind AxA relationship, because LOGH will demand that you take every character with real interest and understand what lies behind different versions of Kircheis' one-phrase-does-it-all "Hai, Reinhardo ( ... )

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angel0399 September 27 2014, 09:45:42 UTC

Seriously I love Alexei more ^__^

kajornwan September 30 2014, 01:30:05 UTC

Glad you do. There's nothing more satisfying than writing ebil Alexei again!!

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kajornwan October 1 2014, 01:57:14 UTC

Hi there! I was wondering how you were. How is your brother? I hope he's getting better. *hugs*

Poor Alejandro trying to play poker with a pair of sharks!
Ahh, that may be true but dear Andy has quite a few things up his sleeves and not afraid to use it either XD

Alexei is a pain and a charmer all in one really. But I don't think Alexei can hold a relationship with anybody, TBH, except his brother who would forgive him over and over again. But I would say that for Alexei, Alejandro does mean more than Fei.

You write so much about this Galactic heroes that makes me curious. I just don't really watch anime anymore.That was exactly what I told Jelly. "I don't watch anime anymore, period. I prefer books and manga." But since this isn't available in any other format, and it is long enough to get my interest (I don't watch or read anything short) I had to give it a try. But most of all it was because Jelly (and everyone who has been through the 156 episodes) came out mentally unstable, shaking heads and going "Did I just finish the ( ... )

delwynmarch October 4 2014, 01:12:50 UTC

"You write so much about this Galactic heroes that makes me curious. I just don't really watch anime anymore."

In the case of LoGH, anime is really nothing more than the medium. And that's a damn shame, because if this thing were live action, it would have one of the biggest fandoms on Earth. You can take pretty much ANY live-action series out there which is lauded for its great plot and its outstanding characters, and still be sure that a live-action LoGH would DWARF those series. Like, say, GoT? It's a freaking joke compared to this.

But it's anime, and there's no sex and barely any (overt) romance, and it's stuffed full of non-manichean politics and space battles, so it's certainly not as attractive as most other stuff :/

kajornwan October 4 2014, 05:12:48 UTC

If this were live action, Game of Thrones wouldn't sell. The plot twists in GoT is a joke in comparison, you never get retarded kings in LOGH, and while you know everyone you love can die in a single episode of both LoGH and GoT, LOGH's deaths makes absolute sense and is never stupid. Every time someone gets excited about the next GoT episode (and I used to be one), I find myself going, LOL, you REALLY haven't watched LOGH.

barely any (overt) romance,I wouldn't say that after 26. Reinhard has the equivalent of CI's love bracelet so to speak after this. And the entire series depends on if and when he touches that locket. It's worse than my Love pendent, because people live or die because of that locket alone and the phrase IKWA that gets spoken by everyone even Yang will make you say all the time, "this might not have happened IKWA." Luckily, LOGH is not retarded enough to rely solely on this, because Reinhard does have more than a handful of admirals that will see to it that he gets the throne whether or not he has second thoughts, ( ... )