Comments | kak_utau: [Gintama Fanfic] Phone Bills

kak_utau

Sep 03, 2008 08:10

Fandom : Gintama
Title : Phone Bills
Pairing : OkiKagu, GinHiji if you squint
Word counts : 677
Disclaimer : Hideaki Sorachi owns Gin-chan and the others

( It was silent, her humms echoes silently, a giggle, string of curses, soft smile, giggle again, and eventually blush creeped into her cheek, adoring it with faint pink color. )

Comments 2

Great Fic! floenz September 3 2008, 14:18:07 UTC

I really like it :3 The idea of Kagura and Sogo talking all night long is so sweet X3

dalilamoon21 September 3 2008, 18:22:22 UTC

it's a sweet, cute and short. A perfect litle drabble. But, If you fix the grammar a litle, and work on sentence structure it will read better.