Underneath It All_Chapter 5 (Part 4)

[kakashi2000]

Finally !!!!! The final part of the final chapter...*sigh*..I'm already missing Ruka-chan ~!!!

CHAPTER 5

THE TRUTH BEHIND THE MASK

PART 4

Konoha Hospital…

“ There must be more they could do !!! ”

“ Naruto, they are doing their best for Kakashi. The Hokage herself is personally looking into it ” Maito Gai said with a kind smile, ruffling the boy’s

Comments

[saelani]

alright Kakashi, molest the poor chuunin. Awesome fic. glad to see you writing again.

Thanks

[eling1]

I like this fic very much. I read it some time ago and I'm happy you're updating it :)

[new_moongirl]

awww! it was so sweet and sad! :D i like it how it had a million falshbacks! XDDD great job! te ending was teh best!

[oni_link001]

*sigh* That. Was. Wonderful. I'm so HAPPY that you're writing again. \(^o^)/

Couple little tiny things though:
When Sasuke is comforting Naruto he says “ Don’t you date forget it ” I think you mean: "dare forget it."

also

When Jiraiya is talking to Iruka he says "...especially for the ones he love ” I think you mean "the ones he loves." Loves not love. Maybe? Yes? No?

Anyway...YAY YOU'RE BACK AND WRITING!!!!!!!!!!
\(^o^)/

[rocky5mew]

So heart warming and loverly <3

Thanks so much for finishing this in the time of loss... no more Halco, wah wah >.<

Wonderful writing :3