A short poem about rain

[kalipha]

There's a hole in the sky where the rain gets in
And its drumming on the ground makes a rhythmic din
And puddles like mirrors, with other worlds in.
But only I can see them.

Adendum, first bit of feedback on my little poem? "I never knew you were a Vogon." Meanies.

Comments

[warlockuk]

First line reminded me of The Beatles :)

[ariandalen]

I rather like it. :)

You know, it's perfectly acceptable to ignore such comments.

[kalipha]

Thanks, Arian :) And lo, some of you were indeed on LJ! There a fiends LJ community too, or just individual fiends?

[ariandalen]

Just individual fiends, as far as I know. I suppose we could make a community, especially with Fiendom Come happening in June. I'm not sure any of us has thought about it. :)