A piece of Kame for soulsoul

[kame_mod]

Title: Red Ruby
Pairing/Group: Kame/Uchi Hiroki
Rating/Warnings: PG-13, angst
Summary: Everything is dark around him. Fog surrounds him and no one is able to help him out. But maybe there a light at the end of the tunnel.
Note: For soulsoul, I was really excited when I got you in my assignment. really hope you like the story. I had a lot of fun writing it

Comments

[kame_mod]

TURTLE for soulsoul

[kouchi]

This is awesome. The perfect angst I want, and a happy ending.

especially this part.

“Hiroki, can you help me getting out of this vicious circle?” Kame ignored the other one’s question. “Can you help a stupid boy to get a normal life again?”

Uchi smiled a bit, his heart making some jumps. He brushed Kame’s cheek and leaned a bit forward to place a kiss there. “Sure, no matter how long it will take.”

Kame smiled at him. He tried to sit up and wrapped his arms around Uchi’s neck before he could protest and order him to lie down again. “Thanks.” Kame whispered. He smiled at Uchi. It was a tired smile, but it wasn’t sad. Uchi could see a small sparkle in Kame’s eyes. The things he didn’t see for a long time were there again. His eyes weren’t empty anymore, there were feelings in them. “No problem.” Uchi answered, returning the smile. He felt Kame’s lips on his, and he knew he’d help him out there, no matter how long or how difficult it would turn out to be."Hero!Uchi and fragile!Kame is the best. 8D And its like, only Uchi could heal

[yoru_no_hikaru]

Oh, that's pretty angsty. O_o Poor Kame, starting to cut himself. >_< He must have felt so torn. *cries* And then even that accident happend. I feel really sorry for Kame, he doesn't have anyone he can talk to, he's too ebmarrassed, but he cannot cope by himself...

Uchi is very sensitive. He notices the changes, all the small things about Kame. That's so... <3 And aw, he's worried about Kame too. I LOLed when he told Kame about the get-together and then it was like "it'll jsut be the two of us". Uchi is very considerate, really, and aubtle. That's a big win, I think. It wouldn't help if he "knocked" Kame down.

Aw, and I love the ending, really. These two are so sweet! *___* I'm sure Uchi will be able to help Kame back into a happy life... with him. ^_~

This was my first ever Kame/Uchi and I really enjoyed it a lot. Thanks a lot for sharing it!!! <3

[sweetspicyhot]

Well i am a person who like some angst. But I like angst followed by hope even more. And you certainly delivered that here in an awesome way. My heart was breaking for Kame the whole time, and especially how he had to have that fake smile all the time. i love how Uchi figured it out just in time. The hospital scene was really well written---Kame's words were so powerful, and even though he couldn't accept how he had fallen so far--we could see how formidable the obstacles had been in his way--and Uchi could understand, and help Kame move forward. Well done :D