"If someone already has her ears pierced, I'll pierce 'em again!"

[kamerasutra]

Here is a story I wrote when I was nine. Names have been changed because I used real ones, sucka.

Comments

[almas_amani]

Gasp! you are an amazing author, Vanessa Prolow. Publish that. and make a million dollars. i'll direct the lines when people are standing around waiting to get your autograph for your fine work of art there. well done, madam.

What a dirty (and dangerous) trick!

[adolph_loos]

A most riveting piece. Prolow takes the conventional innocence of a little girls' slumber party & renders an inventive drama. Readers will be taken on an emotional rollercoaster ride as they struggle to see outside the intense empathy -- & in fact, equally intense love -- Prolow cultivates for Madison, in order to judge the beloved character's ruthless actions. Is she wicked? Is she simply sharp-witted? The answer is difficult. Prolow does maintain a sense of tenderness throughout the work, however -- this is clearly reflected in her gentled ending. Yet the overall feel is quite haunting.