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[kamikaze_shoujo]

How's my RPing with this character? Please comment here with any compliments, constructive criticisms, or other concerns/comments.

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Comments

[anonymous]

I don't know if any other anons have come forward from anoncomm, but I wanted to offer my observations on Aya.

I think the problem people are having tagging her (myself included) is that you never give anything other than dialogue. We never get any idea what she is thinking, or what she is doing physically (pacing around, making faces, etc). Using only dialogue is like using only text when communicating online. Without facial expressions and intonation, a lot of the meaning is lost.

[kamikaze_shoujo]

This seems like a fair observation, anon. Most of the time, however, I don't bother to note facial expression in normal comments because the icon does that for me most often. If there is something worth noting about the expression, I'll point it out, but otherwise I feel no need. Thoughts and actions, however, are something I can agree are lacking. Thank you for taking your time to point this out.