I give you all (Yunho/Jaejoong)

[kannuki_neru]

Title: I give you all
Author: kannuki_neru
Word count: 100
Concrit?: Yes please :)
Pairing: Jaeho
Rating: PG13 just to be safe
Written for dbsk-flashfic challenge 31: Unspoken
Summary: Until there wasn’t anything between them (not anymore)

Comments

[sukitooru]

kya~ jak zwykle zajebiscie napisany drubblik :D:D:D i to takie slodkie,ze Yunho jest taki delikatny i w ogole...*__________* bardzo fajowny;D

i nie wiem po co ci beta-reader...O.o xD

[kannuki_neru]

Dziękować, dziękować :D

Jak to po co xD Żeby naprawiał pomyłki. Meeega. (to mega w sumie nie było na temat ale musiałam go użyć, bo.. nooo xD)

[carmini_]

i loved "Yunho breathed at last and wrote his answer all over Jaejoong’s body."
that was beautifully written ^_^ very nice =D you could imagine how they were together even though this was so short. keep up the good work ^^

[kannuki_neru]

Thank you! I'm so glad that you liked it ~ ^^

[quiet_heartache]

ooooo, nice stuff..
particularly love the end ^^

thanks

[kannuki_neru]

I'm glad you liked it and thanks for commenting :D

[moon1084]

Yunho breathed at last and wrote his answer all over Jaejoong’s body.

wooooah that gave me shivers beautiful. i wont mind beta-ing but i can only do YunJae.

[kannuki_neru]

Thank you! *^^*

That's okay, I'm still going to need a beta for other pairings but I'll send you my Yunjae whenever I write one xD Thank you so much for helping out ^^

[moon1084]

i guess its cuz we havent friended each other so your LJ inbox is set to only friends being able to send you messages. so i can't respond back moon1084@yahoo.com ju