Comments | kannuki_neru: 5 seconds [Yunho/Jaejoong]

kannuki_neru

5 seconds [Yunho/Jaejoong]

Jun 14, 2010 22:26

Title: 5 seconds
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Members of DBSK are not mine.
Warning: Un-betaed.

( Although it’s probably the heart that suffers from the impact )

fandom: dbsk, pairing: yunho/jaejoong, fanfiction

Comments 4

mearii87 June 14 2010, 23:38:25 UTC

this: Yunho likes Jaejoong’s mouth and imagines how it’d taste. He has five seconds to daydream since after that there’s no upwards curving of lips and Yunho has to stop feeling like he’s the one being smiled at with love. So sweet and adorable.

Is what I meant to say....sry to spam your inbox...

kannuki_neru June 15 2010, 23:03:21 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting~ I'm glad you liked it :)

dilovesyunjae June 15 2010, 02:20:48 UTC

wow....you know, just by these few words that you wrote, i can feel yunho's pain.... its like, my heart is crushed, especiallly this line....

"Yunho always counts the time between sunrise and total eclipse and one day he might just go blind from the constant switching. If he did, there’d still be too many senses to feel Jaejoong with."

he's consumed by jae.

kannuki_neru June 15 2010, 23:03:56 UTC

Thank you :) *mends your heart*