Sketches [Yunho/Jaejoong AU]

[kannuki_neru]

Title: Sketches
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong
Genre: AU
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Members of DBSK are not mine.
Summary: Scenes from the lives of Yunho and Jaejoong as two aristocrats who meet by chance and find more than they had been expecting.

Comments

[xzeffirx]

Nice! And only the way they talk hints that they are not farm boys.. But I think the result of the meeting will still be the same in any era they are born :)

[kannuki_neru]

Thank you! Hahah, yunjae as farm boys is yet another good idea ;) And as cheesy as it sounds I also believe that they're soulmates ;__;

[ouji]

I like the painting metaphor. This is a really nice verse and I hope you may be inspired to work on it again (maybe). Thanks for writing.

[kannuki_neru]

Thank you very much for your kind comment! Initially I thought of a longer piece in this setting but somehow couldn't really stretch it... so for now it's this! Thank you again :)

[ultamatempa]

this feels very melancholy, but lovely nonetheless. as much as they love each other, it feels like there's a time limit to their relationship.

[kannuki_neru]

Thank you for commenting! That's a really lovely interpretation, it does feel like their love is somewhat doomed.. in all timelines really ;(

[donud]

This feel so mature.. Calm and compose state of YunHo and JaeJoong.. I loves how the fact they said each other name with "shi" it's sounds so vulnerable, delicate, and so pure

But the ending quite confusing.. It's like YunHo just imagining of JaeJoong? I feel the time of their live was in the past?

[kannuki_neru]

Thank you for commenting~ I also really like it when they address each other like that, it makes it somewhat special.

Sorry it's confusing! I feel like Yunho thinks that their moments together might end badly but he still wants to have it for what it is. But your interpretation is as valid, it depends on how you read it :)

[shin_ah_mi]

beautiful emotions ^^ you portrayed here^^
please continue

[kannuki_neru]

Thank you~~! ^^