Day stylin

Jun 06, 2004 00:08

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It is I, Jerry/Joseph anonymous June 10 2004, 10:20:34 UTC
Tim,
I love the rhyme scheme and the unique POV expressed in this poem. One question though..... Who is "she"? Call me nosy if you will, but I'm just rather curious. Great poem, not your best, but great none the less.
- Jerry/Joseph
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Re: It is I, Jerry/Joseph anonymous June 11 2004, 05:55:14 UTC
The Tim
Hey bro. No you cant inquire. but im sure u know so dont ask. and no not the recent crap. but ud know who it was if u thought about it
and its a song. i think its pimp. kinda sublimish/ska like

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Re: It is I, Jerry/Joseph _michella_ June 13 2004, 07:27:16 UTC
Yes Tim. Good poem. :D Hi Jerry its chelle.

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