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[toshiya]

Title: delusion.
Author: tsuribashi
Pairings: Kaoru/Toshiya
Rating: G
Summary: You're stuck with me, you know about that don't you? As I am stuck to you, to any of you.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Comments: Yaaaaaaaaay. Yeah, I'm bored... and I write drabbles, because I have no life. xD

Comments

[bl4ckm4lice]

......wow.
That's... I dunno how to say it. It made me feel... emotional. It caused a lump in my throat and I might bawled if I'm not at the office.

It's like an unwritten love letter, very beautiful. Kaoru's feelings are so pure and giving without asking. I can't help but smile at "even me who in stage I feel like a god". He just had to insert that self-love bit, but that's so like him. Endearing nonetheless. Kaoru's description of Toshiya just made me melt. If only Kaoru want to step over his comfort zone and spill it to Toshiya...

Lovely piece. You've done a great job.

[toshiya]

Ah, Thank you so much I feel really flattered.

They started like random thoughts popping into my head all the 'you're stuck with me' and stuff and also the when we were young feeling, I always wanted to write something like this and I am happy it didn't become lame or terribly chessy.

I'm really happy you like it, dear.
Thank you so much
&hearts

[kurenai_tenshi]

Kaoru is...... hopeless! LoL He's so full of himself ("even me who in stage I feel like a god"), but he doesnt even have enough courage to confess to Totchi. Poor old man..

and yeah.... i agree with bl4ckm4lice, i love how you portrait Toshiya through Kaoru's eyes. you show us Kaoru's abundant love to Toshiya, but with "You're stuck with me, you know about that don't you? As I am stuck to you, to any of you." i can feel Kaoru's love for the rest of the band too. Not because it's an obligation because he works with them, but because he loves them.

I'm in love with your Kaoru

[toshiya]

Haha well yeah, I think that's the part I love Kaoru the most, he's full of himself but he still has that lack of self esteem that makes him not go and confess.

Thank you so much, I am so happy you liked it!
&hearts

[bauci]

I like these 'random thoughts'.
Made me smile d^^b

[toshiya]

thank you lady!!
<3

[wilwa]

That was really great. I agree with the previous comments. It's very emotional and touching, one realy feels how much Toshiya means to Kaoru. And I also like Kaoru's description of him. Smiled when he mentioned the funny laugh xD.

Its sweet and loving, but also sad in the knowledge that Toshiya doesn't know how much he means to Kaoru.

It's just... Really good.

"but you're the only person who can probably enter in the classiest pub on earth wearing sweatpants and old tshirt, just because is you, and just because you make that look like a designer piece." I thank that is true xD.

[toshiya]

Thank you so much!! I'm glad that I could express the loving, almost admiration feeling Kaoru had towards Toshiya without sounding cheesy *laughs*

isn't it?? xD
man, he really shines with anything he wears xD