Final Chapter!

[kara_winchester]

Well, here it is, my first ever completed fic! I need to say a great big thank you to astrangerfate for helping me write this. She has been amazing, and I'm so grateful to her :) And thanks to all of you who have read my story, and an even bigger thanks to those of you who have commented on it! It's so cool to know that people are actually enjoying your work

Comments

[astrangerfate]

Once again, Dean trembling was just gorgeous from the start, and you already know how I felt about the delicious, delicious belt...

And I want all the stories, but the report cards call to me...as does the party...and teh mouthsoaping...and...yeah.

Maybe if you wanted to condense, one of the kids could swear during a discussion about report cards and you could stick soap into that...

But the more fics the better, so ... carry on!

[kara_winchester]

Lol, yes dear, the belt was just for you :) I'm still not sure what my next fic is going to be, but I'll try and make it better than this one!

[kezzie5]

Oh god you're making me choose between all of those brilliant ideas?! Ok I really like the sound of the party one or the pranking as I forgot it would be boys vs. girls and I'd just like to see where they take that.
Though I have to make it clear I like all the other suggestions too.
But for the party one would they, or at least Dean, be old enough to be home alone and have a neighbor next door they could go to if there's trouble? I'm just wondering if the youngest girl would be at home too therefore giving another reason as to why John would be furious that she was in the house whilst they had a party.

Going to go read this update now lol x

[kara_winchester]

Don't worry, I plan on writing them all eventually! And as for the party fic, Dean would probably be old enough to be left in charge of his siblings, and the twins would at least be 13. That would mean, however, that the youngest would be far to young to be exposed to wild teenage partying, which would definitely make John furious (just the way I like him!) Thanks for all of your supporting comments!

[kezzie5]

You're welcome. That comment you said there about making John furious is just how I like him too, especially the way you write him where he has that element of tenderness too. So when you write all the fics I'll support you but I especially look forward to this one

[kezzie5]

Dean's fear from the beginning for what he'd done was just so perfect, but him calling John daddy and the way you wrote this
"When the final spank fell, John threw the belt behind him and immediately began to rub his son’s back, trying to calm him. Dean’s shrieking wails worried him, although he knew that much of his son’s pain was due to the shame and remorse"

Just made me ache for both of them, for Dean having the punishment and for John having to not only deliver it but the fear he must have felt for his boy missing. Really loved every bit of it, I love the tenderness x

[kara_winchester]

I love John tenderness...I hope someone will tell me if I ever go overboard with it, though :) I'm glad you liked it so much!

[thevulgarvirgin]

What a great end to this story! Very lovely, and I adore the domesticity of it all because we don't often get to read alot of that. Love Dean's snark “No Sammy, it felt as good as a freakin back massage. Of course it hurt, you dork. I’m not sitting on a pillow for the fun of it.” LoL, he's too cute. Can't wait to see what you write next, I have yet to see a mouth soaping fic and it's awesome idea, hope that you write it!

[kara_winchester]

Thank you so much! The main reason I started this series is that most of the stories we read about the Winchesters deal with hunting, but although John has given the boys such an untraditional lifestyle, he is very traditional when it comes to discipline. I wanted to see what the Winchesters would be like if they were able to experience normal childhood and teenage disobedience problems. Also, I wanted to see what kind of father John would be if he had a daughter, since he's already so strict with his boys. I'm glad you liked the domestic twist I tried to put on it, as well as Dean's smart mouth :)

I'm still not positive what I'm going to write next, but mouth soaping is a definite possibility. Right now, I'm trying to figure out if people are okay with John disciplining his daughters, and that will probably be my main factor in choosing my next topic. I'll try and make it enjoyable!

[nocturnal08]

Congrats! Great story. I'm glad John was patient with Dean when the boys was so trembly and vulnerable. One question: When did Dean have time to get into jeans. Wishful thinking on his part, I think. :)

My top two choices are the party idea and then mouth soaping. Very exciting!

[kara_winchester]

I'm glad you liked it so much! I like this series because it allows John to be a little more patient and loving, as opposed to all military and strict all the time. As for Dean wearing jeans, I thought I had changed it to sweatpants when I realized my mistake, but I must have missed a word, so sorry about that!

It looks like the party idea and the mouth soaping are the two most popular choices. My only concern is this: are people going to have a problem with John spanking one or more of his daughters as well as the boys? Once I get that question answered, I'll get started on my next fic right away!