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kara_winchester

Final Prompt!!!!

Sep 25, 2007 19:02

Yay, I'm so excited! This is my third and final prompt for the 50 prompts challenge, and it's the prompt "shouting". It's a John spanks Dean fic, which is always fun to write :) Even though I don't have any more prompts, I've gotten some ideas from all 50 words, so we'll see what I come up with ( Read more... )

supernatural, john spanks dean, shouting

Comments 18

hucknclem September 27 2007, 04:51:12 UTC

Oh, you killed me with this! Defiant!little!Dean just breaks my heart, and so does regretful!John. Dean scared but not wanting to give in, and John scared and WANTING to give in, and neither one of them able to do what they want... *Melts into puddle* Thanks for sharing! :)

kara_winchester September 27 2007, 13:16:02 UTC

Don't die! I'm still looking forward to your prompts lol. I'm glad you caught the tension between John and Dean...I don't usually do tension, so I was trying to work on it :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

hi! suprnaturalgirl October 1 2007, 21:05:50 UTC

I love this story! You are great at writing dean emotions!I found your live journal a couple months ago and i really enjoyed you fics. I hope you don't mind that i friended you..I just love your fics! thanks for sharing your stories with everyone!

Sumer :-)

Re: hi! kara_winchester October 2 2007, 00:08:20 UTC

Of course not, I can use all the friends I can get :) Thank you for the sweet comments! I'm glad you like Dean in this fic, I wasn't positive he was realistic, but I liked it. Thanks for reading!

ficwriterjet November 11 2007, 05:37:07 UTC

Again, sorry about the late feedback. You have a story idea for all 50 of the prompt words???? That's amazing. :) I'm just happy you signed up for three - and good job getting them all done by the way. Dean was really a little creep in this one! LOL. I couldn't believe the things he said to John! Bad Dean. I liked that John knew he was way to angry to deal with Dean and sent him to his room so he could cool down. I thought Sam's fear at the yelling was very realistic, and I loved the way John comforted him once he realized what was going on. I felt kind of bad for both John and Dean when Dean wouldn't give in to the punishment, and I was glad when John stopped and gave Dean a while to think about things. I was also glad that John didn't actually have to use the belt. I thought Dean's complete turn around after breaking down was pretty realistic. Thank you for the story, and for letting me put it up on the prompt page at my website. :)

kara_winchester November 12 2007, 04:51:31 UTC

Lol yeah I was talking to Cam one night and I threw out an idea for every single prompt word...I'm a dork :) But I've got enough ideas stored up for a long while thanks to the prompt words, which will hopefully console us while the writer's strike is going on :)

Lol I wasn't really intending for Dean to be a creep...just a conflicted adolescent :) But yeah, he was getting pretty lippy in this one, wasn't he? I'm glad you liked everyone's individual emotions in this fic, I had a lot of fun with them. And yes, I was glad that John didn't use the belt, but it was fun pushing him and Dean to the limit :) Thanks for reviewing and for the whole prompt thing in general!