Happy Early Birthday Cam!
Alright, so astrangerfate's birthday isn't for a few more days, but I have been talking about writing this fic for months, and she has been extremely patient. So, in honor of astrangerfate, here is my newest fic, Report Cards. A huge, huge thank you to
minx999 and hucknclem for betaing this fic. You girls made such a huge difference, I can't thank you enough. Anyways, here's the fic, hope ( Read more... )
minx999 and hucknclem for betaing this fic. You girls made such a huge difference, I can't thank you enough. Anyways, here's the fic, hope ( Read more... )
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First, it was....gah. You know how much this pushed my buttons and...gah! It's....unbelievably hot. Just unbelievably. You are unbelievable.
So some of the stuff that really, really did it for me (aside from the whole idea that I've been bugging you about for months :D):
Still, Dean knew it wouldn’t be enough to pacify his dad, and he groaned inwardly as he thought about his upcoming meeting with his dad’s evil hairbrush. John Winchester didn’t make idle threats, and Dean was well aware of that fact, more than he ever wanted to be, he sadly realized. There was no doubt in his mind that he would be sleeping on his stomach tonight and probably for the next few nights. Oh, John! It just sets it up to be so pretty and ouchy! The buildup is fantastic.
And these bits? Just completely and totally perfect for Sam and Dean...beautiful characterization here. "So it was with no small amount of surprise to Dean when instead ( ... )
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And okay, this? You *know* this is exactly how I see the boys growing up, and every time someone else spells it out it's like a validation. :) It wasn’t often that Sam was this naughty; he was over John’s knee frequently for minor things such as backtalk and not going to bed when he was told, but very rarely for any serious offenses. It was Dean who tended to receive the more severe spankings that John delivered, and John was used to having to come down hard on his eldest. This was unfamiliar territory with Sam, and John sighed as he reluctantly opened the door.
“D-daddy?” he said fearfully, not quite believing what he saw. “What are you doing?” Gave me chills of horror. Absolute chills.
And yeah, this line is also just teh hawtness, over and over and over again. “It’s not the belt, Dad,” Sam said shakily. “I mean, yeah, I don’t want you to use it, but…it’s just…can’t I go over your lap?” he blurted out, his face turning crimson.Psh, this comment is becoming ridiculous. But...yeah. All of Sam's spanking was just oohhh...heart ( ... )
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And, of course, Sammy is that sweetest!
But his distress at the whole ugly situation became all too apparent to everyone in the room when Sam only flinched and whimpered under his breath at the smack before hustling himself from the room without a word or look back. That's such a great description!
"Do you actually think I want to take a belt to my baby, Dean?” John exploded. Aw. That made me feel for John! Love Sam as his "baby"
And Sam needing to be over the lap was also wonderful.
Great story!
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I'm glad you loved Sam as John's "baby"...I figure it's a little unrealistic for John to call him that at his age, but I'm guessing he'll always think of him that way :)
And I'm so happy you liked Sam needing to be over the lap, I've been wanting to write that scene for months! Thanks for reviewing!
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