The Product of My Thanksgiving Vacation :)

Nov 25, 2007 00:10

Hope everyone who celebrates Thanksgiving had a great holiday! Here is the newest installment of the series that astrangerfate and I are working on. We won't be posting another chapter for a few weeks, but that's because it's a special Christmas chapter we've been planning :)

Huge thanks to minx999 for betaing! Hope you all enjoy ( Read more... )

sam, john, supernatural, spanking, dean, series

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astrangerfate November 25 2007, 05:35:10 UTC
Aww sweetie, why are you sad? :(

This is so pretty, you know I love it. I still think you just did a ban-up job with the spanking. :) Yay!

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kara_winchester November 25 2007, 05:41:36 UTC
I'm glad you liked the spanking, it was giving me trouble:) And I just hate going back to school for the time between Thanksgiving in Christmas-particularly with all the roommate issues going on. Plus health crap :( I can't wait for us to write the next part of this, it's going to be our best yet!

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littlestarling November 25 2007, 06:56:52 UTC
This is a really good story with a unique premise! Poor little Sammy! Can John still beat the crap out of that principal?

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kara_winchester November 25 2007, 07:24:35 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yes, I just want to cuddle Sam, but at least John's taking good care of him :)

We haven't really talked about John doing anything to the principal, but since there have been so many comments about it, maybe we'll see what we can do :)

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atalantaj November 25 2007, 18:07:27 UTC
Good job on this. It's nice seeing John as a dad first and a hunter second. I like the premise too. I'm thinking that at some point John must have tried home schooling his kids. It makes sense with them constantly having to travel around.

I'm all for John having a smack down with the principal also. I feel really bad for Sam having nightmares over what that guy did to him and Dean. It was especially sad when Sam was separated from his brother and Dean was calling out his name while Sam was being paddled. That part broke my heart a little. I could imagine the two of them calling out to each other and not being able to help one another.

Oh, and I also liked Dean telling Sam that the paddling was scary for him and that it was messed up. I think Sam needed to hear that from Dean, that he wasn't making a big deal out of nothing.

Thanks for posting. I'm excited to see the holiday part you guys are working on.

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kara_winchester November 25 2007, 18:34:16 UTC
I'm glad you like the premise :) I agree, he probably did try homeschooling. I don't know how John could have always had his kids in regular school without getting noticed by the authorities for constantly moving them around.

It actually hurt my heart to describe the paddling. That's one of the reasons why it was so brief, it was really hard to make Sam talk about it, because it was so sad. But I loved writing Dean telling Sam that he was scared too. I hadn't meant to put that in originally, but it worked out really well I think :)

We're excited for the holiday part too :) Hopefully we'll get it finished soon! Thanks for reading!

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nocturnal08 November 25 2007, 18:24:42 UTC
John is beyond sweet. I'm glad he was patient rather than spanking first, asking questions later, lol.

The line “But you are my baby,” is my favorite ever. (see dead man's blood: you are my children... my heart does a little squee every time!)

And Sam calling him Daddy and him calling Sam "baby boy" and holding him close. It's so sweet.

Thanks for this!

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kara_winchester November 25 2007, 18:37:25 UTC
I think John learned from his mistake in the last fic, and he's trying to be a lot more patient with his boys :)

“But you are my baby,” was my favorite line too :) I didn't plan it, but I got to that part and it kind of spilled out. It made me feel all warm and fuzzy :) And Dean Man's Blood is one of the best eps ever!

I'm glad you liked the "Daddy" and the "baby boy". I don't usually plan on making them that sappy, but I figured in this scenario a little sappiness was necessary :) Thanks for reading!

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minx999 November 25 2007, 19:24:27 UTC
*smiles* Even better reading this the second time around. :) Can't wait for your alls Christmas one. Yay!

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kara_winchester November 25 2007, 19:57:27 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Thanks for all your help!

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