Comments | karanina: Tokens Of Affection: Copper

karanina

Tokens Of Affection: Copper

Feb 18, 2007 22:49

Series: Tokens Of Affection
Fandom: Firefly
Pairing: River/Jayne
Prompt: 041 Copper
Word Count: 1,128
Rating: PG

A/N I: Huge thanks go out to
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Comments 17

diluki February 18 2007, 12:07:13 UTC

Just lovely! I like considerate Jayne.

karanina February 18 2007, 21:01:55 UTC

Glad you enjoyed. He's not considerate so much as being careful not to expose himself too much. He doesn't want to get hurt, but at the same time, he's trying to let her know that he thinks she's a bit of alright.

guinny_hamilton February 18 2007, 17:20:16 UTC

Shiny! Glad you're finally writing things again!

Also, that last paragraph is *exactly* what I would do *hides*

karanina February 18 2007, 20:58:26 UTC

Don't be embarassed! We're girls! We horde (sp?) little things like that to remind us of special moments! I do it too!

Glad you're enjoying. I'm just trying to keep things simple with this ficlet series. Each story is going to be self contained, although part of the greater picture.

I just don't want to get halfway through it and get bored and end up disappointing people like ususal. I find that I write shorter stories better than serials!

crazywriterchic February 18 2007, 18:22:22 UTC

That is so cute! Oh, I can't wait for more.

karanina February 18 2007, 20:59:46 UTC

Glad you enjoyed! There's definately a couple more in the works. Hopefully the next one will be up in the next week or so. Some stories take longer than others!

angel932 February 18 2007, 22:14:11 UTC

I've said this before, but I just love the image of Jayne leaning against the doorway. Sex on a stick!

*blushes* I wish I could find an icon!

karanina February 19 2007, 23:14:56 UTC

Were you thinking of maybe a little something like this?

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angel932 February 20 2007, 00:25:50 UTC

Oh, what a fabulous icon! Totally squee-worthy! Mnd if I use it?

karanina February 20 2007, 00:40:13 UTC

Yeah sure! You're the whole reason I made it...

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romanceguru February 19 2007, 04:35:57 UTC

I love the way you’re rolling this out. It makes me feel all warm and fluffy inside. I was thinking the same thing about Jayne leaning against the door hatch, for some reason the image is damn sexy. Thank god River was under the console or she would have lost it. ;-p I really enjoy reading your stuff, I hope you keep it up!

karanina February 19 2007, 23:18:43 UTC

I hope I keep it up too! I love the whole guy-leaning-against-door look. It is so very sexy - seemingly relaxed, yet exuding power on the right guy - and Adam is DEFINATELY the right guy!

I've got something in mind for the next story, so hopefully it won't be quite as long a wait... depends on what I have to do this week.