Innocent Questions

[karanina]

Ok so under the cut is my very first attempt at drabble, and it IS exactly a hundred words (Go me!). So be nice - unless you really can't, cos I'm not sure what I think of it.

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"Daddy?"

"Yeah Pumpkin."

"Why did you and Mummy have to get married?"

Jayne looked at his daughter Jessica and frowned slightly. "Whaddaya mean have ta?"

"I

Comments

[fairandbright]

Adorable!

[karanina]

thanks sweetie - but my big question here - did the why of the HAVE to come through? I wasn't sure it did, and I'm not really experienced at drabbles - it was hard getting it all on 100 words.

[fairandbright]

'Course it did. :D But they would have gotten hitched eventually anyways. BECAUSE JAYNE LUVS HER SO MUCH!!!1!

[karanina]

Whew ok, so both little messages came through then? He had to marry her cos he loves her, and he had to marry her cos she was preggers - poor bugger never stood a chance! Thanks for the reassuringness - I will strive to be less needy in future!

[romanceguru]

The why was her pregnancy, right? Nevertheless, it’s also because he loves her, because how could you not? Anyways, very nice. Drabbles are tricky little things!

[karanina]

Yes! Ok whew! So it did come through! I was worried I either was being too vague, or not vague enough - I don't know. But thanks for reading and commenting! And thanks for reassuring my insecurity!

[bookaddict43]

Love the emphasis on the have it has so many implications which you illustrated well! Great first drabble.

[guinny_hamilton]

Awww! I love Jayne's internal struggle and his subsequent diplomatic answer!

Awesome!

*loffs on you*

[elliejgirl]

Awwww... that was sweet.