New Fic: Untitled

[karanina]

Title: Chapter One
Series Title: As yet untitled
Author: Karanina
Disclaimer: I wish... I wish... I *wish!* Nope still not mine.
Rating: R

A/N: I absolutely SUCK at titles, so I'm throwing the floor open to any suggestions. Please... I need help!!!

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Mal strode into the bar on Beylix and looked around for Monty. The former Browncoat had waved Mal about a

Comments

[calijirl5150]

Great start. How about calling it "Flying Young"

[karanina]

Thank you, both for reading and the suggestion.

[crazywriterchic]

This is so great! I sense a love triange, or at least some competition to motivate our not-quite-bright merc. Sometimes he needs a lil' push.

[karanina]

Gee... however did you guess.

[crazywriterchic]

How did I know....? Well, gosh, I guess psychic is just catching. :P

[karanina]

Too true, too true. Thanks or the suggestion, it's got the wheels turning

[earthwhatwere]

I like the story so far, but I don't know if I'm any good at titles, at least not without seeing where the future chapters are going (hint, hint) and getting a sense of a theme.

[karanina]

Thanks... I've been inspired to come up with a few ideas, so I should have a title the next post.

[soulmeetsoul]

what do you mean there's no rayne yet? there's plenty of rayne for just getting into the story :)

really like the start. love the simon/kaylee interaction. can't wait to see what happens next.

[karanina]

Well I had to have SOME Rayne interaction to establish the fact that it was a Rayne story, even if it was just in Jayne's head... I've always thought he had a rather vivid imagination!