"The Switch" - Part 18

[karanna1]

“Want to ride together today?”

“As if I have a choice.”

Their mother had grounded Charlie and taken away her car for two weeks because she didn’t come home until two o’clock in the morning. No phone call. No nothing. They had been seconds away from calling the police when Charlie stumbled in with Puckerman cradling her in his arms. She had

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[winstonta]

:D This is full of so much awesome. I was so happy to see this, especially since it ended as happy as it possibly could IMO. Gotta be a tough situation. Well done all around!

I noticed one small error: “We’re going to better for this,”

Also, where is that pic of "Charlie" from? I'm usually pretty good at placing the pics, but I can't place that one.

You rock, btw.

[karanna1]

1) Thank you so much for pointing that mistake out. Sometimes you can read over something a dozen times and just never see it because your brain is automatically inserting the correct way. Stupid brain.

2) THANK YOU! I think I'm still going to finish with one more part. I don't know.

3) That pic of Dianna is actually from her movie "I Am Number Four" haha

4) THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[winstonta]

*blush* so many thank yous. I always feel like a bit of a bitch when I point out minor errors, but I know that I would like for others to (politely, if possible) point out my fic errors.

re: 1) You're very right, I do the same thing, substitute a word or skip over something because in my brain I know how it should be. Stupid brain being... smart... *tilts head, raises eyebrow at my own logic*

re: 2) *claps* yay there's gonna be more! I'm excited :)

re: 3) Ah, I didn't remember that. I saw it once in the theatre (and yes I am planning on buying it if for nothing else than to see her scenes on my tv--yes, I'm that lame lol)

re: 4) YOU'RE VERY WELCOME

[buryyourflame]

I'm glad to see that they don't hate each other. I feel terrible for Charlie, though. Can't wait for the last update! :)