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[karbeelah]

I'M A DIRTY HOOKER SLUT

Comments

[justlikeaprayer]

OMG I MADE WITH THE PEEEEEE

[mountain_jew]

this poem is truly touching, but i think if in the last verse, you had said something along the lines of, "i'm gonna lie in bed with her until we're swept away by a monsoon," the imagery would've been much more vivid and illustrated your point that much more clearly.

[bottrock]

hahaha!
that was delightful!