The Problem with Engagements

[karesu]

The Problem with Engagements
Author: Karesu
Pairing/Series: Sherlock/John [BBCs Sherlock]
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Isn't mine, I promise.
Summary: Written for this prompt on the kink meme. 5 ways in which Sherlock almost proposed marriage to John and 1 way he actually did propose. If the 5+1 thing is not of your liking, then a general "Sherlock proposes

Comments

[snowishness]

Absolutely adorable. Sherlock would hack John's profile as a way to propose.

(One minor comment, if you're okay with constructive criticism. At one point you said mussels where I think you meant muscles.)

[karesu]

I was in such a hurry to get this done I didn't proof read it at all. I'll fix it.

Also, thanks for much for reading~!

[da_cursednlucky]

HAH. REFERENCE TO ACTUAL BOOKIES! (not obsessed, clearly)

That was beyond adorable. :D

[karesu]

KNOWS ENOUGH TO REFERENCE BOOKIES!! [not a complete and utter dork, I swear it]

I'm so glad that you liked it! :D

[kickair8p]

Heeeeee! :D

~

[ladygray99]

This is very cute but that last line is absolute win.

[karesu]

Thanks for reading, I'm glad that you liked it!

[anonymous]

It's adorable. :3

Just a few things, though. I can't tell if this supposed to be written in past or present tense, because it switches around so much. Also, you don't need to restate established facts; I doubt anyone left between paragraphs.

[karesu]

Yeah I know that I need to fix it, but I was just so focused on getting the damn thing done it wasn't high on the list. I'll either have to get a beta, or go over it this afternoon and fix it up.

Thanks for reading, and I'm glad that you liked it despite my terribly writing.