Badass Intervention [Fic. Glee. Puck/Rachel]

[karesu]

Story: Badass Intervention
Rating: T
Pairing: Puck/Rachel, mentions of Puck/Lauren
Summery: Lauren was a badass. Of course she was the one that sent him the right direction.
A/N: Written at 1am 'cause I'm tired but not falling asleep. Needed something to do. Not edited. All mistakes are my own.
Disclaimer: I don't own Glee. Seriously there would be WAY

Comments

[kimmi_watch]

Hehehe, awesome. Very in character and funny.

[karesu]

Thank you so much for reading, I really appreciate it! Also I'm amazed I stayed in character when I was half asleep, lol.

[nova802]

Great! I loved Lauren here, especially this: "She cut him off, "Not that, you moron, that is hilarious. I'm talking about breaking my heart and shit." She said it in a tone that could convey she was talking about the weather

Hilarious!

[karesu]

Yay I'm happy that part wasn't lost in sleep muddled translation. I guess I can just picture her being very nonchalant about the whole affair and that just set the tone for everything.

Plus Lauren has always been observant, she really isn't stupid,and she would totally notice the whole Puck and Rachel thing and figure she would cut her losses early and get Puckerman over his pining for her.

Thank you so much for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[shadowkitty22]

Man you have the most spot on Lauren I've ever read. I absolutely loved the way you wrote her. I could totally picture her squinting eyes, pointing fingers and other facial expressions as she told Puck what a dumbass he is and to go and get the girl already.

[karesu]

Yay I have my Lauren down! Then again a lot of people don't seem to write her. Like, at all. If anything I've only read a couple people mention her at all, but I personally like her character. It's kind of refreshing to have someone so down-to-Earth when everyone else is "EMOTIONAL DRAMA OMGGG!!"

Thank you so much for reading and I'm glad that I got the character down. I hope you really enjoyed :)

[shadowkitty22]

I have to agree that I haven't read a whole lot of Laurens either but I think you did a most excellent job with your characterization of her.

[storywriter84]

Wonderful! I love everything about this story.

[karesu]

Thank you so much for reading!

[karesu]

I'm so glad that you liked it!