I'm really enjoying this, sadly it seems you've lost readers over the last few chapters, but it really is a great story so far - definitely worth the read - and I would love to know what happens next.
Oh but of course! I know! I think this is my best fic yet, and I've lost readers. *Sighs...* I'm going to give you a special look at the next chapter...
“Since the Harrisons are in witness protection, that gives us the power to investigate this case.” Carlson began.
“True, but this is Virginia,” Fornell began, “that gives the FBI the power to investigate.”
Gibbs lowered his voice before speaking. “Kate Todd used to be a government employee. Her last employment was at NCIS, and since a former NCIS agent’s house caught fire, that gives us jurisdiction!”
The three men were in an argument, each trying to top the other in an impossible and difficult game of rock-paper-scissors, when the chief firefighter came over.
“Hey, hey HEY!” he yelled, finally getting the attention of the three elder men. “We’ve found the point of origin and deducted that this fire was no accident.”
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“Since the Harrisons are in witness protection, that gives us the power to investigate this case.” Carlson began.
“True, but this is Virginia,” Fornell began, “that gives the FBI the power to investigate.”
Gibbs lowered his voice before speaking. “Kate Todd used to be a government employee. Her last employment was at NCIS, and since a former NCIS agent’s house caught fire, that gives us jurisdiction!”
The three men were in an argument, each trying to top the other in an impossible and difficult game of rock-paper-scissors, when the chief firefighter came over.
“Hey, hey HEY!” he yelled, finally getting the attention of the three elder men. “We’ve found the point of origin and deducted that this fire was no accident.”
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