HELP!!!

[karigan_heart]

Hey guys, I have a rough draft of a short story I need to finish for Creative Writing. I'm in a bit in a pickle about how to end it or what kind of twist I might use. I'm posting it here. Any suggestions on how to end it would be fabulous, because I'm sick of looking at this story. It's only supposed to be about ten pages, and it's already there,

Comments

[gypsychick7]

Ok, so first of all, every nuisance of Elizabeth's behavior should be Nuance, not nuisance

[karigan_heart]

Thanks Kylara for the comments. They were really helpful.

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