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karisblue

Brightness Falls- Chapter 13

Nov 09, 2011 19:49

BRIGHTNESS FALLS- Chapter Thirteen

He thought of Lureen, and Bobby, and how worried they must be ( Read more... )

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happygirl1 November 10 2011, 02:10:21 UTC

yeah!! Thank you for this chapter. It scares me some what the outcome may be but...I hope you still like "happy endings". Go Jack!
Can't wait for the next installment.
Gwen

Brightness Falls- Chapter 13 karisblue November 13 2011, 17:48:19 UTC

Gwen, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading, and for your infectious enthusiasm. :)

chapter 14? happygirl1 January 21 2013, 01:55:25 UTC

Hi there...I'm still hoping for your story to continue...Any chance of the next installment in 2013??? Pretty please!! :) Gwen

crackcoffee November 10 2011, 02:23:21 UTC

OMG. I hope Jack won't get hurt anymore or will be able to escape in the evening. Looks like the team found the right house but they'll be late if they go in at midnight. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Brightness Falls- Chapter 13 karisblue November 13 2011, 17:49:42 UTC

Thanks for reading!

Jack is in a bad spot, isn't he?

I've started the next chapter.

Yipee joetheone November 10 2011, 03:18:22 UTC

I"m so happy for an update. I'm very sorry to hear about Alma moving back to the house I hope she and Junior are safe. I know this is hard for her, but she also seems to know that her relationship with Ennis was just a facade for the public eye. One good thing was Junior for her and Ennis I hope that she will let Ennis be apart of her life. As for Jack he is cunning and smart and well when in a bad place adrennaline will kick in and hopefully save him. With him on the inside working and hopefully the cops on the outside coming in they may get someplace I just fear they won't get the ring leader. So happy to see an update. Joe

Re: Yipee karisblue November 13 2011, 17:50:46 UTC

Thank you, Joe.

I love your detailed comments, they are very flattering. :)

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Brightness Falls- Chapter 13 karisblue November 13 2011, 17:52:13 UTC

It makes me happy that you are rereading Stranded- I was really wrapped up in that story for a long time, and it's nice that people are rereading it.

Thank you, PJ.

redrobynis November 10 2011, 08:03:47 UTC

Hi Barb,
Lovely to see this new chapter. Thanks for staying with it. I'm not reading as you post, so I won't comment, except to say I'm looking forward very much to reading the completed story.
Robyn.

Brightness Falls- Chapter 13 karisblue November 13 2011, 18:41:58 UTC

Thanks, Robyn. That's encouraging.

I don't think it will go more than another chapter or two.( Famous last words.)