It Started With a Handshake

Jul 25, 2013 20:16

For the Summer 2013 Challenge at Brokeback Slash

He’d like to think that he felt an electric shock when he first shook hands with Jack Twist, like in those romance novels Alma used to leave lying around the apartment.

But he didn’t. ( Read more... )

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happygirl1 July 26 2013, 20:50:52 UTC
Hi there..it's good to see you back!! I enjoyed this quick one and much as your other stories! It there a chance you might post the remainder of brightness falls? I'd so like to see how Ennis and jack begin their new life together.... After you get jack out of the "situation" he's in! Please think about it. I've seen others inquiring about this great story!! Gwen

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It Started With a Handshake karisblue July 28 2013, 19:20:47 UTC
Gwen, I know I have left a lot of people hanging with Brightness Falls, and I feel bad about it.

I do intend to finish it, but I can't commit to a date. My life has changed a lot in the past couple of years.

I appreciate your interest, and I'm glad you liked this little oneshot.

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morrobay1990 July 26 2013, 22:59:31 UTC
Canon - my favorite!

Ennis always kept his head down, but after those first couple of days on Brokeback he started picking his head up to listen to Jack.

I love that image...how he started to open up after only knowing Jack a few days...I love the way you showed us Ennis's "imaginings" of Jack and of how he felt.

Just great!

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It Started With a Handshake karisblue July 28 2013, 19:30:21 UTC
Thank you so much!

I know you love canon, so I'm very happy this worked for you.

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jacks_key July 26 2013, 23:47:29 UTC
Excellent!

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It Started With a Handshake karisblue July 28 2013, 19:31:02 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it!

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Summer Challenge - It all Started with a Handshake kathan12 July 28 2013, 00:20:38 UTC
I love this, barbara. It's so sad. Ennis was always lying or pretending to himself re his feelings for Jack.
But his love for him was always there, always.

kathy

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Re: Summer Challenge - It all Started with a Handshake karisblue July 30 2013, 02:18:50 UTC
Thank you, kathy. Glad you liked it.

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chamilet July 28 2013, 07:00:10 UTC
Bittersweet!

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It Started With a Handshake karisblue July 30 2013, 02:19:23 UTC
Thanks for reading. :)

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