Fic: She's Gone 6/6 - Bringing Her Home Olivia/Natalia

[karjens40]

Author:  Karjens40

Fandom:  Guiding Light

Pairing:  Olivia/Natalia though actually more Blake/Doris-Friendship

Rating:  PG (Potential swears)

Spoilers:  This is pure speculation but let’s say week of June 29th. Especially July 3rd. (Crystal was amazing, but Jessica blew me away.)

A/N:   A little what if... What if Natalia called as she and Blake were

Comments

[lazydevil40]

wwwoooooooooooooooooooooooo

oh yeah, what a ride, feel like I've been on a rollercoaster here and i hate those flippin' things...

wonderful!!!

[karjens40]

HA. Thank you very much. As long as you did't throw up. heh. I wasn't sure if this part came up to fast or perhaps I should add another part. (No Sex! heh).

[lazydevil40]

IMHO, it was perfect and most people know wyou don't write sex scenes, you don't need to... the powerful way you depict their emotions sometimes does more than one of my graphic love scenes... love it, job well done... ;D

[karjens40]

Great big hug to you for that. Thank you very much. And though you didn't get first read before posting (Sorry bout that, had to post it all before my boss showed up heh)...You're still the first one to read it all. (Ceridwyn beat you to the first part heh). and not many other people will. Does that help? LOL

[chappelled]

This was amazing I loved everything. And I agree with Lazydevil you didn’t need a sex scene; the emotional rollercoaster with a happy ending was awesome. Oh and bossy Natalia paired with grand jester of professing her undying love for Liv, plus, putting Rafe and Ray in their places…priceless AND a public kiss *melts*

[karjens40]

Whew. I'm very glad you liked it. Nat's going to have to do something VERY big when she gets back and I can't think of anything bigger heh. Nat so needs to break away from the emotional chains Rafe has put on her. (or puppet strings if you will).

Thanks so much for your lovely comments. Made me very happy.

[ceridwyn2]

This was a brilliant story. LOVED it. Tension, humour, angst, snark, love, the blue dress of win (with lots o' cleavage).

Natalia "Freakin' Superhero" Rivera with a backbone, a microphone and the grand gesture!

Wooohooo. Hugs. I WANT it!

[karjens40]

Oh Yay. Thank you so much. I'm very glad you liked it. And the inclusion of the dress. Somehow it seemed appropriate. Oh forgot to mention the cleavage heh. *snaps*. I tweaked this part a little bit. I still feel Nat needs to say a little more.

Thank you for the hugs and wonderful comments. Made my mood a lot brighter heh.

Woo hoo!

[ndasky1]

Doris and Blake rocked! Go Natalia!

And that kiss...Yowza! This fic was made of win. Thank you for sharing it.

Re: Woo hoo!

[karjens40]

Oh thank you thank you. You say the loveliest things. heh. Now if only I could manage it with originals heh.