The Return Part 3 Olivia/Natalia

[karjens40]

Title:  The Return Part 3

Author:  Karjens40

Fandom:  Guiding Light

Pairing:  Olivia/Natalia

Rating: G

Spoilers:   None really just the weeks Jessica was on ML.

Disclaimer:  Guiding Light and all of its characters belong to Telenext and Proctor & Gamble

This is speculation regarding Natalia’s return.  Thanks to Lazydevil for the read through.  Part 1 can

Comments

[lazydevil40]

for as long as I read fanfic... you will be one of my fave writer's... you know I love this fic... can't wait for more....

[karjens40]

Oh I am so honored you said that. What a lovely thing to say. I'm changing your name to lovelydevil heh.

There were a few things you suggested changing that I left in hope you don't mind. There was a purpose in them, though I can't remember just now what it was LOL

Thank you so much. And YOU will always be my favorite Bliss writer. :-)

[lazydevil40]

HAH, don't you dare! there's a reason for that particular name lady! =D

and it's your story, you write it your way, I just gave an opinion on what I thought... if you think your way is right then you keep it, I don't mind...

and I'm your ONLY Blis writer...LOL... go read some of the other authors... some of it is actually really good (and much better than mine)

I thudded at some of it ;D

[bluejace]

I know you said you would post the other parts at your journal but I forgot. I remembered when I saw another minisode posted. This is great, especially now in context, part 2 was a nice contrast to part 1, each of our women having a confidant to speak to. I think a crisis such as you wrote would the kind of act that would seal the deal for them. Wonderful, thanks for writing.

[karjens40]

I'm so glad you remembered and took the time to read and comment. I'm especially you enjoyed it. I was't sure if Natalia collapsing would be too predictable but I figured that's about the only way to get speedy forgiveness from Olivia at this point heh. Thank you again.:-)