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karjens40

The Grand Gesture-Olivia/Natalia

Aug 09, 2009 23:24

Title: A Grand Gesture

Author: Karjens40

Fandom: Guiding Light

Pairing: Olivia/Natalia

Rating: PG

Summary: Natalia goes a-wooing. Sort of.

Spoilers: None really. This is set after Natalia’s return.

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Comments 18

lazydevil40 August 10 2009, 08:00:13 UTC

Can I just say.... THUD

Excellence from you as usual, wonderfully detailed and angsty but awesome & seriously hot too

love it

karjens40 August 10 2009, 13:43:12 UTC

Weee! a thud from the Queen of Thuddage herself.

This totally came to me when I was trying to sleep the other night lol. Damnit. I'm very very happy you liked it. Hopefully Natalia's actions were believable and in character?

Thank you so much again you always leave me such wonderful compliments. :-)

lazydevil40 August 10 2009, 15:52:52 UTC

HAH, I was always told that "revenge is a glass best served cold" and by fuck did that one catch me cold...

I still need help to move around... believable, in character... who knows... I'm too freakin' hot to think gay, never mind straight!!!!

karjens40 August 10 2009, 16:15:11 UTC

LOL. I do hope you feel better though.

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laughsunshine August 10 2009, 18:48:21 UTC

Before I *thud* and you kill me *ded* I'd like to say how how hot & charming that was.
I'll go collapse now.

karjens40 August 10 2009, 19:16:17 UTC

Oh wow. I'm honored from the "thud" but I'd hate for you to hurt yourself. heh.

I am so very very glad you liked it. Thank you for reading and commenting.

pandora_007 August 10 2009, 19:15:17 UTC

WOW.. just WOW.. loved it

karjens40 August 10 2009, 19:17:29 UTC

Thank you so much. I was nervous about it. Especially the ending. I'm very glad you liked it.

Thankyou

magicmumu August 10 2009, 19:54:59 UTC

I really loved this story. I love that they are taking things back, but slowly, to ensure that it was for real this time, you know? I am glad that I read this story because it was beautiful and shows that healing takes time.

Erin

karjens40 August 10 2009, 20:11:06 UTC

THank you so much.. I'm glad you liked that. As much as I wuold love to see instant forgiveness, I know it's not going to happen and rightfully so. But where anger and mistrust remains so does love, yes?

Thank you again. :-)

meatisadelicacy August 10 2009, 20:51:29 UTC

I love an assertive Natalia, and I loved this story.

karjens40 August 10 2009, 20:55:43 UTC

Thank you I'm glad you liked it. I wanted to make her a little assertive but not too much as Olivia is so in the right as far as being pissed heh.

Thank you for liking it and commenting. :-)