OVS: Our Christmas Present-Act 5 (Deleted Scene)

[karjens40]

Our Christmas Present-

Karjens40

Betas:  Ariestess, Commasplice and Cheerfuloceangazer.  Thank you!

Artwork:  Shaych_03/Grumpybear
Rating: PG

This is part of the Otalia Virtual Season and is a scene that had been cut due to continuity for the upcoming episode.  I've also included the epilogue again for closure.

Act1-4


ACT 5

“Alone at last,” Natalia

Comments

[ndasky1]

*tries to form words...fails*

That was just uhm...wow! I'm sorry it got cut though very happy you posted it here. Will try to post more when brain does not equal mush...

[karjens40]

Sorry I turned your brain to mush heh heh. I'm glad you liked it. To me it finished off the story. better. but *shrugs*. This was my final otalia fic so hope it was good heh

Thanks sweetie.

[lazydevil40]

oh my goodness... *blushes* and this got cut why? seriously, I've just managed to catch up on the whole OVS story and have to say that your writing is amazing... captured, captivated and still blushing... thanks for sharing... excellent, loved it

[karjens40]

aww thank you and I made you blush WOO! lol. Long story as to the cutting and I wasn't particularly happy about it. To me it rounded out the whole gift theme I had going but what can you do lol.

I'm very happy that you liked it. It's my last fan fic. I've officially retired heh. Since gl is off the air, there's no more Otalia left in me and there's no other pairing I have any interest in so. Basta heh. I'm all about the originals now.

Thank you as always for the very lovely words. You inspire me to keep writing. :-)

[lazydevil40]

NO NO NO NO

I din't just read that correctly... *pouts... retiring from FFic... *wails.... NOOOOOOO!!!!

bugger!! what am I gonna read now?