Fic: Bluetrace (Sherlock)

[karlamartinova]

Title: Bluetrace
Author: karlamartinova 
Pairing: Sherlock Holmes/John Watson
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: No, still dont own nothing beside few books and TARDIS key chain!
Word Count: 1 580
AN: So yeah finally, my first (real) Sherlock fic. Written for a prompt at Make Me A Monday on sherlockbbc , for shwas  who wanted: John goes back to Afghanistan during/because of Sherlock

Comments

[vix_spes]

I loved this, particularly this line: No, he packed his things and came to the second most dangerous place after the one he occupied recently at Sherlock’s side.

I also love the fact that John didn't mope around, he went and did something and in doing so, left a trail for Sherlock.

A great fic to enter the fandom!

[karlamartinova]

Thank you! And yes, it made so much sense, I absolutely adore that Mycroft said to John about missing the war. John as much an adrenaline junkie as Sherlock is, but know its inappropriate to show it so much.

[mushroom18]

Of course John wouldn't sit around, he'd want to be useful. That was a spectacular failing in Sherlock's part. ♥ Yet he's right, John is brilliant. And so is this fic :)

[karlamartinova]

Yes, first and only failure Sherlock ever made :)

Thank you!

[disastrolabe]

This was very nice. I like the easy, organic nature of their romantic realization especially.

[karlamartinova]

Thank you :) It comes naturally, because they knew it all along, it just never was time to say it.

[lbmisscharlie]

Oh, this is lovely. I love John going off to another dangerous place, staying active, helping people, hoping Sherlock's still alive to come find him one day. I really love Sherlock not seeing, because he's always a bit blind when it comes to John, isn't he?

[karlamartinova]

I absolutely agreed with your comment, John isnt as brilliant as Sherlock but he is more human, and hope is a very humanly emotion :)

Thank you for your comment!

[shortcrust]

Oh gosh, that was lovely.

[karlamartinova]

Thank you:)