Comments | karmapolice4: Here's a story I wrote in 7th grade, like a badass....

karmapolice4

Here's a story I wrote in 7th grade, like a badass....

Jan 29, 2005 22:28

Science Fiction: Chilled To The Bone ( Read more... )

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altosven January 30 2005, 05:29:07 UTC

Why would anyone eat quarters for shrimp? Couldn't they just use the quarters to buy shrimp?

Sing to me!!!! bigbadearz January 30 2005, 05:42:42 UTC

Sooooooooo incredably disturbed, thats what you are! (And I love you for it!)
When excactly did you turn this in and get a "B" on it? like this year? Because that'd be crazy!
~David

Read Closer captain4n6 February 2 2005, 00:57:54 UTC

It clearly states that he wrote it in the 7th grade. This implies that he also turned it in in the 7th grade. Gosh, you're buggin the heck outta me. Dickweed.

PS: captain4n6 February 2 2005, 01:16:00 UTC

Super Story Andy. I loved the part where they saved the planet. How did Jack change into a woman though? I'd like to hear more about that. Not that I'm considering it... its just interesting.

Re: PS: karmapolice4 February 2 2005, 03:20:59 UTC

Well, when a man loves a woman very much he...uh...

..I don't know where this is going...

If anyone was wondering, here is my favorite line from this story...

"Ray turned slowly and saw a saight that made him go boom boom"

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eeelise January 30 2005, 19:16:14 UTC

fucking great.