go jenny go pt.1

[kashiah]

jenny is at school and wonders were emma is. she is so worried about emma she doesn't her the bell ring. as jenny is driving home she passes gabbys school, she sees someone crying. she drove up close to the school to see who it was. gabby emmas little sister. jenny gets out of her car to see what the matter is. gabby told jenny. jenny listened very

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[ptcruz]

I am honored you picked names from my fic. I like the story,Jenny sticking up for Gabby,cool idea. Can I offer constructive criticism? Try using quote marks when they are speaking, otherwise it runs together. Just a thought for you. =)

[kashiah]

you post what happens next after emma got to jennys house and i'll post the next one i'm working on