Comments | kashibanohikari: Gin/Kira Drabble

kashibanohikari

Gin/Kira Drabble

Dec 20, 2008 07:05

Title: A Chance Meeting

Disclaimer: I do NOT own Bleach or it would be so yaoi-full ...X3 this is also my first GinxKira so please leave me comments and opinions! <3

Summary: Takes place back in the acadamy. Kira is reflecting one winter night when he gets an unexpected visitor...

( GinxKira This Way! )

Comments 10

gypsy_girl090 December 20 2008, 22:37:25 UTC

As I'm a terrible, terrible fangirl who hasn't watched Bleach, I don't know the characters, but I liked it! :) Very naice. Makes me want to start the epic project that will be watching all of Bleach. XD

kashibanohikari December 20 2008, 23:29:24 UTC

XXDD yes Bleach watching is definately epically epic! X_x but oh so worth it for mind fuckery like this XXD thanks for the review my dear! *chu~*

quaggy_chan December 21 2008, 00:08:40 UTC

Lol, this is kinda cute. :) :) I like it!

I especially like the bit at the end, where Gin thinks to himself, and where you put in there about the future.

And it isn't too long, either! I like the length of this one, it's just right. The way you were talking on the phone, I thought you meant it was going to be long! But, it's easy to read, it's concise without sacrificing any detail or dialog, the characters are IC as far as I can tell, and you did very well with Gin's accent! AND, it's cute. :)

If you ask me, there need to be more GinKira fics out there like this one. :)

kashibanohikari December 24 2008, 22:06:50 UTC

thanks! *HUGGLECHU~* glad you liked! ^__^

ceestar December 22 2008, 12:31:03 UTC

Aww that is so .. bittersweet!!
Poor Izuru, you did this so well, kind of went sad, happy then sad again.. which is a little depressing but well.. it's the 3rd Division after all. You didn't let our minds wander into false happiness because the reality is that Gin hurt Izuru so bad.

Great job ^______^

kashibanohikari December 24 2008, 22:07:40 UTC

thanks! And yes poor little Kira T_T I was thinking of making another scene like this though only later on after the betrayal what do you think? Should I?

ceestar December 25 2008, 01:19:29 UTC

Ooh yes you totally should! I love post-betrayal fics!

kashibanohikari December 25 2008, 05:12:59 UTC

awesome! I will definately try to work on it as soon as possible and dedicate it to you then ^__^

anonymous January 5 2009, 01:09:23 UTC

Kawaii! hehe Poor Kira, kawaii ^_^ hehe well written, short and sweet loved it cant wait to read more, keep it up ^_^ x

kashibanohikari January 5 2009, 01:13:04 UTC

*giggles* thanks! And thanks for reviewing my dear *kissu!*